Hey,

Just passing through and wondering if you could read my story Business Deal. It's my first one so comments (good and bad) are appreciated :) Thanks!

<3Michelle

hi, would you mind reading my story, i would love some constructive criticism and what you think about it

"All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls

Synopsis:

Aliza is in a binding situation, literally! With her breasts constricted, wearing her brother's loose clothing, and dropping her voice to the lowest level, she's attending Ascham, an all boy's school! If that's not enough, throw in an extremely hot roommate, who suspects Aliza, aka Alex, of not being exactly what "he" appears to be and you have a chaotic relationship---if you can even call it that.
http://www.wattpad.com/257206-quot-all-boys-school-survival-guide-quot-for-girls

PS. Please read till ch 2 before you decide to continue reading or not

hi ya!! *smilies and waves*
i 'm wondering if u could read some my story "10 Reasons Why an Emo Guy and a Preppy Girl Shouldn't Fall in Love!"
i only posted the first and second chapter but the 3rd is gonna come pretty soon. please tell me what YOU think of it, it would really mean a lot.
thanks
take care
xoxo-Teresa