hi, would you mind reading my story, i would love some constructive criticism and what you think about it

"All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls

Synopsis:

Aliza is in a binding situation, literally! With her breasts constricted, wearing her brother's loose clothing, and dropping her voice to the lowest level, she's attending Ascham, an all boy's school! If that's not enough, throw in an extremely hot roommate, who suspects Aliza, aka Alex, of not being exactly what "he" appears to be and you have a chaotic relationship---if you can even call it that.
http://www.wattpad.com/257206-quot-all-boys-school-survival-guide-quot-for-girls

Hey , just wondering whether u could check out my profile. My stories are liked by quite a lot of people but i would like ur view on my stories. Just leave a comment and i'll see wat u think.

A xxx

ps : could u leave a comment on If i was so happy, lolzz

Hey (: Thank you for the message.. I will be finishing We've got this far together.. Why stop now? (: I'm glad you're enjoying it..x