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just a dreaming teenager
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Small Big Regrets

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Description: Heaven was not the place where Jenna, Teylor, and Aster thought they would meet their best friends, but heaven was indeed the place it happened. They all live in the Corner of Regrets, the settlement for souls who committed suicide. They join togeth...

colorfuldreams commented on Amnesia


colorfuldreams
Good start! A little tip: try to combine some of your sentences they're a little choppy, and don't always start your sentences with a subject, try to start them with with a verb instead.