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It's hard to read because you don't break things into paragraphs. I think if you did that it would be easier to digest the story.
Dragon Slayer

She just gives up and lets the vampire bite her without knowing him? I would say you need to build that relationship before you drop a plot twist...
The Secrets of the Unknown....

Awesome read, I'll definitely be be back for more. If you get a chance swing by my story.
Nahtaia: A Faery's Tale - A...