It's hard to read because you don't break things into paragraphs. I think if you did that it would be easier to digest the story. Dragon slayer She just gives up and lets the vampire bite her without knowing him? I would say you need to build that relationship before you drop a plot twist... The Secrets of the Unknown.... Awesome read, I'll definitely be be back for more. If you get a chance swing by my story. Nahtaia: A Faery's Tale - A...