Status: Tried to write a Short Story for a class, tell me what you think? (8 months ago)

chochie

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I lovee music and Books, those two are pretty much my life. Apart from my family of course. :)

Some of my favorite bands would be...
-The Script
-A Day to Remember
-Three Days Grace
-Paramore
-3OH!3
-State of Shock
-Needtobreath
And much much more.

Some books I couldn't live without would be...
-Blue Bloods: Melissa De La Cruz
-Twilight: Stephenie Meyer
-The Hunger Games: Suzanne Collins
-Harry Potter Series: J. K. Rowlings
-The Uglies Series: Scott Westerfeld
-The Fallen: Thomas E. Sniegoski

And for as on here, I love different types of novels/stories, mainly the myth type of stuff, like werewolves, vampires, people with powers that kind of stuff, I'm a supernatural buff. ;)

So please read, vote, and comment on my stories below, Thanks. :)

Some of my favorite quotes:

The stars are not wanted now; put out every one,
Pack up the moon and dismantle the sun,
Pour away the ocean and sweep up the wood;
For nothing now can ever come to any good. - Funeral Blues: W.H. Auden

'Cuz this life is anything but certain,
When they close the final curtain
You'll get a glimpse of the truth...
'cause you're still around.
-Still Around: 3OH!3

"BEST Crew, Stands for Bumbleebee Extreme Step Team."
-Ryan Higa of Nigahiga.

"Dirty dirty dirty dirty dirty dirty sucka
You think I can't get hurt like you, you motherf**ker
I can do it like a brother
Do it like a dude
Grab my crotch, wear my hat low like you
Do it like a brother
Do it like a dude" Gotta love Jessie. ;P

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The Puppeteers Dilemma

3 pages, updated Sep 12, 2012 PG-13

tags / assassin courage death love strength

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Seekers of The Night

4 parts / 6 pages, updated Sep 01, 2011

She could feel his teeth bite into the fragile skin of her neck. An uncomfortable moan escaped her mouth as she arched her neck towards him. A satisfied moan came out ... read more

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chochie
8 months ago

I had to write a short story for my College Composition class, and it would be EPIC if you guys could check it out and help with it. It's only three pages long sooo.... :D

chochie
9 months ago

@DarkVioletDreams98 Sure. :)

AleDreamsFantas...
9 months ago

Hey... I was wondering if you could please fan me back... pwease?

sandeemontalvo
1 year ago

If you have the time, please check out my stories? x :)

AleDreamsFantas...
1 year ago

I just feel like I can communicate more w/ my other 2 stories than with Arentia, so when I post the next chappie you will see the difference in the writing from the beggining to the end. And I just learned stuff from your msg :-O
@chochie

chochie
1 year ago

@DarkVioletDreams98 okie dokie. ;) EXACTLY! i once read somewhere that if you are having trouble with a part of a story that you are either not doing it right or that it's not even supposed to be there...and that's kinda freakin me out a little bit cause now i'm doubting myself. Like right now, for the life of me, I can't figure out a good curse, as bad as it sounds. ugh. I know the feeling, i had other stories up but then i kinda lost touch with them but i still feel like they're bloody good ideas. pahah There's always one story that you love more than the others i've noticed. :b

AleDreamsFantas...
1 year ago

@chochie K, but remmember that you asked for it 8D

Well, I already know what to put in Arentia, but I don't find any motivation to write it :*(, I am more into my nerdy story LOL I adore to write in that one, but once I get stuck on that one or have just posted the chap and I still have inspiration, I'll work on Arentia. You can try my idea, but do it faster pwease 
8-}

chochie
1 year ago

@DarkVioletDreams98 pahaha THANK YOU! you are currently my favorite person. ;) I already know what's gonna happen, i just...don't know how to say it? In a way...hahaha. It's complicated. :b Noooo, i love comments. :) It helps me soooo much, thank youuu! :D

AleDreamsFantas...
1 year ago

@chochie yo you I'm not the only one that loves your story >:-) Besides, I'm just like, the only one that has OFFICIALLY shown their love to your story here (shame on you, other Seekers of The Night fans >XO ) and I'm honored to do so. I am kinda having a writer's block in Arentia: Twin Princesses but I will try to overcome it in order to be able to help with yours, meanwhile you can do plots on paper, try to mix them up and make a story out of it 8^O. Wow, I just gave a good idea, actually good XD, I think I'll use it and get help from myself LOL! Man, I can't stop writing... C U before I start writing more (for your benefit XD

chochie
1 year ago

@DarkVioletDreams98 omg omg i LOVE you right now. Seriously, dude. ;) But uh, yeah, i've been trying to work on it but alot of stuff have come up lately... i know thats no excuse, sorry. But i have some major plans for it yet! I've just had some bad writers block but now that i know someone loves my story...well, its given me some motivation. :D

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