cfarrell

Name Claire Farrell
Location Ireland
Birthday Mar 24
Member Since Mar 13, 2010
Votes Received 568
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I'm Irish and have been writing for years.  I have two books on Kindle and Smashwords - just search for my name, Claire Farrell.  If you like One Night With The Fae send me a message and I'll give you a code for a free ebook copy.  I'm planning on writing a full length novel based on this book and what happens after that night if people like it.

I'm hoping to publish Cursed so I'm looking for feedback on that one in particular.  (It's finished, I'm still editing it.)  Feel free to leave comments, bad or good.

Works

Cursed with Verity - Completed (for now)

Cursed with Verity - Completed (for now)

19 parts / 91 pages, updated Apr 26, 2011PGPicturesCompleted
67,373 reads votes 509 comments 134
A Faery Tale - Finished

A Faery Tale - Finished

10 parts / 18 pages, updated Apr 25, 2010PGPictures
3,297 reads votes 49 comments 21
The Butterfly Killer

The Butterfly Killer

1 page, updated Mar 23, 2010G
270 reads votes 4 comments 5
The First Rose

The First Rose

2 parts / 17 pages, updated Mar 20, 2010PG-13
550 reads votes 4 comments 7
The Old Kind

The Old Kind

4 pages, updated Mar 13, 2010GPictures
302 reads votes 2 comments 1

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ellesays
ellesays

4 months ago
Hi Claire!

I just finished reading Cursed with Verity, and I have to say that I really enjoyed the story. You have a great idea and it's a bit different from the typical werewolf story, yet has all my favorite things. Right now, the book you have posted is a pretty good length to publish as a Young Adult (YA). However, I would recommend elaborating a bit in certain parts. For example, the ending was a bit rushed. Throughout the book you have these people following her and threatening her but they do nothing until the last chapter. Also, I felt there was too much of a time lapse between major events. Most stories take place over a short time frame. In an adult romance, for example, the events can bring the couple from stranger to marriage in like five days. There are a couple other things, but they are mostly nit picks, like Noah appearing out of nowhere. Overall though, I enjoyed it and read the story in one day. Congrats on finishing your book! 

If you'd like, feel free to message me.

-Elle
MyztikalTearz
MyztikalTearz

1 year ago
Found it. It's  "The Faery Tale". Thoroughly enjoyed it! <3 *Myztikal* 
MyztikalTearz
MyztikalTearz

1 year ago
Hi :) I don't see One Night With the Fae. Have you pulled it off wattpad already? :( 
starfox906
starfox906

1 year ago
Hey I have read your books and I'm waiting for book II , lol I was already a fan and by chance found found you on wattpad 
scorp1980
scorp1980

1 year ago
I loved night with the fae 
eveluv1
eveluv1

1 year ago
hi cud u fan me back or at least read my book The Law Case??????
dixiegirl1993
dixiegirl1993

1 year ago
we have the same background pic, lol. i was hoping if u ever get time if u could check out my story Diner Girl. its not a werewolf romance but it is a romance! and i cant wait for the sequel for Cursed!!
I'm starting a werewolf contest. would you like to join?
cfarrell
cfarrell

2 years ago
@sarlint I'm always looking for beta readers.  :)  I'm going to run through the story once more in January (new year's resolution) and then I'll be interested in getting feedback.  So hard to edit your own work.  If you're up for it, then send me an email at claire_farrell@live.ie and I'll get in touch.  Thanks so much for the offer.
sarlint
sarlint

2 years ago
Hello! Loved your book, I sped through it, it was so easy to read. Well written. Just thought I'd drop a line and see if you still wanted beta readers/etc and to offer my help. My OWN writing may stink, but I've read a lot and I did see a few things I would point out for you- phrasing mostly, because really your work is awesome. I've seen worse in mass published well established authors! 

~S

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@beckablue Thanks for reading. :)
Cursed with Verity - Comple...

@1xravenx1 That was a really lovely comment, thank you. It could do with a lot of improvement but I'm learning and the feedback I've gotten has...
Cursed with Verity - Comple...

@bunn2bunn Sorry. :) It was supposed to be a trilogy but I didn't have the time to carry on with it and I wasn't sure if it was any good.
The First Rose

@bunn2bunn Sent it.
The First Rose

@bunn2bunn Google faery. Faery is the original word used for the type of darker fae in this story, while fairy tends to be used for children's...
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