Bloody Lies

colechantelle
10 months ago

Hey wondered if you would check out my books??Maybe give me a tip on how to make a youtube video?? .Thankyou :')

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singinglovablem...
1 year ago

thanks for being a fan! hope you liked my stories!

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bloodylies2012
1 year ago

being cooked under the suns rays felt like torture, even the breeze didnt help much, all i could do is hope that the water would help. walking into the clear blue water took away all the torture, my body overflowed with the ice cold water. now i feel alot better. i can concentrate alot more, i see families cooking hot dogs, playing frisby, doing stuff a regular american family does on the beach@Lovelymisssnow 

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ArmyWife1990
1 year ago

Lets work on painting pictures with words.

When painting a picture/scenery think about what it looks like.
-where are you?
-what is the weather like?
-what colors stand out and grab your attention?
-is there anyone around you?
-what sounds do you hear?
-are their any smells? 
-How does the character feel?

For instance this picture: http://lh4.ggpht.com/-CkMf-FwUUOk/TiCBpq-J6OI/AAAAAAAAAD0/EBFDuKW396A/IMG_9988.JPG

How would your character describe the view.

ex:
As I walked onto the beach during the warm Summer evening in July I was immeadiately drawn to the sun hanging along the horizon. The warmth of its rays cascaded over my body keeping me warm despite the evening breeze that threatened to chill me. 

The sun played with the clouds, creating a breath taking glow mixed with oranges, pinks and purples as it was setting. 

Off in the distance I could hear a childs laughter barely audible above the sound of the waves before me. Each and every crash of the wave washed away remenants of small footprints that had belonged to the children that inhabited the beach before me.
I could easily imagine them running to and from the waves in their innocent game of chase as I myself had once played there as well. 
.....

So yeah basically you try to give as much detail as you possible could to place the person in that setting. It's not something you will grasp right away but over time you will begin to develope a stronger technique. 

Doing alot of reading helps as well because you learn new words and your mind grasps the details and that specific authors technique as well, if not bits and pieces that help you grown stronger as a writer.

Read a few books and take note of the way the author describes things. Thats what I did and its helped me to where I am to this day.

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DaleMayer
1 year ago

Hi there, thanks for fanning me!

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