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Learning to Swim

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Description: Have you ever felt like you would drown in all of the responsibilities life throws at you? If you know how to swim it isn‘t a problem, but unfortunately for Dakota Gray, she never learned to swim and is sinking fast. Her mother is an alcoholic and...


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Ah man I love it so far! You captured the whole awkward no-one-talking on the train thing perfectly, something I've always hated personally. I probably wouldn't have had the guts to reach out to the guy the way that Jade did, though. Sometimes I think it's easier to just mind your own business, but that just shows a lot about Jade's character that she chose to help instead. Oh and also I don't know the song you posted, but I listened to it as I was reading and I'm totally obsessed now lol  Overall it was a fantastic first chapter and I'm actually really excited to read more :)