piinkL
1 week ago

Hey! Not to be mean or anything but I've been reading ur story and arranged
Marriage with mr billionaire and I just think that you should maybe (again not trying to be mean) but maybe you should rewriteit, I love the idea and everything it's very creative and original (something many people lack these days on Wattpad!) but it seems a bit unrealistic. I haven't read much, but it's like blade and rosy have only met each other since like 2 days and it seems like they are already married. Perhaps, try developing their relationship a bit. Not like going from complete strangers to a loving gf and bf. 
but anyway it's really good and I like the idea!! :) please don't think I'm trying to be mean cuz I'm really just trying to help :)
Xoxo :))

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rassikklopez
2 months ago

@axamaxamaxa: .....well it's really gratifying that I'm done with the ff stories.....at last.....I am completely hooked with it...the billionaire playboys ward, his appointed wife,princess charming, to save a kingdom and princess in disguise.....I'm currently smitten to the alpha meets the rogue/the alpha meets his match and caine......
What about you?..........

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axamaxamaxa
2 months ago

@rassikklopez what are you on about??? lol 

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CarolinaBieber5
2 months ago

Wow half the books u like I like

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CarolinaBieber5
2 months ago

Wow half the books u like I like Hagar 

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rassikklopez
2 months ago

If I have to make my top list...this has to be the top.....what I like here is that there is no third party on the guy's side....I like males who are completely hoked up with their female protagonist....any story suggestions people?

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StupidAndProud
2 months ago

Okay, I'm definitely not lying when I write any of this. I joined wattpad just to comment on this story. I made an account (which I now deleted and made this one) and had voted, commented and supported your story from the very beginning. This story had me looking for it since I remember when I was crazily hooked with this story at the beginning. It's crazy how much I adore this story despite the plot being slightly rushed up. The story and plot was one of the first few areanged marraige stories and your plot is completely original when compared to other arranged marraige stories. I think that is what makes it completely amaing. :) 

I love it. Simply. I waited years for the story to complete (yes, I remember the huge break you took in between which had me hanging on the edge like a crazed person waiting for you to upload), years and years and I can definitely say that I'm glad I stood around this story for so long. It's great. 

I really don't know how to express all my thoughts since they are all over the place and words aren't adequate enough. It's crazy. Blade and Caramel have this special little space in my heart. My first e-book characters and they finally have a happy ending. I coulden't be happier. 

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sasaminott
3 months ago

love ur book@axamaxamaxa

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LizzieBliss
3 months ago

Posted a New Chapter to Forever Knight

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ActLikeAFool
3 months ago

@axamaxamaxa thought the link seemed fishy...thanks for clearing it up...and whilst im here i might reread arranged marriage :-)) xx

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