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Hi! If you're looking for something new to read, please read my stories??? Brief synopsis on my page for the two I am working on: "Not if You Were the Last Man On Earth" and "The Shoes that Charlotte Wore." Thank you!!!
alicev
alicev
Mar 12, 2010 15:09
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Boo! lol, i recently wrote two new stories and would love to get some constructive criticism. Let me know what you think of them :]

MR. HOLIER THAN THOU
Synopsis:
He has a twisted sense of humor and he hates my hair colour. He feeds me chokoberries just so he can kiss me and taste them from my mouth.
The bastard is my Master.
Alston. The atrocious Fae.
She has the ugliest hair he has ever seen and does not appreciate his amazing sense of humor. She loses her temper and her sharp tongue can outrun any Fae he has ever known.
The urchin is my servant.
Méav. The raven haired ecce.
http://www.wattpad.com/271532-mr-holier-than-thou
Quick Fact: Over 80% of the ppl who read the Chapter 1 continue on to read Chapter 3.
Which % are you?

SHATTERED HEARTS
Synopsis:
Life is an empty shell if there is no one there beside you to share it with. Celest knows that all too well. After overhearing her fiancé making love with her step-sister, she shatters. Her quiet reserve is pushed aside to let out a torrent of emotions that have been boiling for the past years.
In an attempt to distance herself from all those who belittle her, she decides to take a long trip to South America. She finds herself taking a flight to Margarita Island with one other lone passenger on the plane.
Too bad life doesn’t always work out as planned.
http://www.wattpad.com/310538-shattered-hearts
maryasha
maryasha
Feb 16, 2010 14:53
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hey :) i can already see that you've got so many people asking you to check out their story... well.... i wont do anything different than that! LOL but i would really be whelmed if you'd check out these:

1. I DONT THINK WE CAN EVER BE TOGETHER BUT IM MADLY FALLING FOR YOU..
2. VAMPIRE WARS:REVENGE OF THE TAKEN!

your comment would mean a lot to me and your critique is welcomed :)
if you'd be a fan.. that way i would know you at least responded! thanks a million :)
tauras19
tauras19
Feb 05, 2010 02:29
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Heyy!! If You get the chance would you mind checking out my stories?

He's Cocky, Hes' Mean, He's My Pet Panther;
Clarke, used to be a normal teenager, or so she thought, until she got involved with some sex deprived boys who turn into panthers when they got "excited"!

Before Autumn:
Autumn has taken the responsibility of being the heir of the most powerful kingdom in the known world ever since her brother died. Now reaching the age of 16, she's about to get married off along with her 2 sisters, her youngest sister who suffers from a unstable ability to read minds is getting married to a power hunger, cocky manipulator of a prince, Gaven. She's determined to get rid of Gaven before he can do harm, but what happens when she wounds up falling for him herself?!

An Idiot's Guide to Love:
Him: A cocky, arrogant, pessimistic jock who has dated almost all the girls from New York to California.
Her: A girl who has her nose in everyone's business, she's loud mouth, tough- never been in a relationship before,and- a fresh fish in a sea of sharks.
They: Wound up as partners for a assignment assigned by a bizarre teacher!

Wait For Me:
"Wait For Me" Jemmy whispers to Kris. Eight years later without him, she tries to fit in at her high school, with the rich girls and the jocks. Spring dance comes up, though Kris can't seem to let go of Jemmy she is offered to go out with Chris, the popular Jock. After seeing a figure in her dreams, and a drop of blood on her pillow Kris is sent to therapy, where she meets a 16 year old therapist Rey Stane. Suddenly entering her life Rey and his secretary Luna enter Kris's high school, what will her boyfriend, Chris think? And whats the truth behind Jemmy?

House of Gods: Daughter of Death summary:

Rhea has always been the sarcastic mature "emo" girl, one faithful day when her best friend leaves her and she undergoes another moment of humiliation, overwhelmed with anger that she had kept inside her for years, Rhea unconsciously ends up killing all her classmates and is acquainted with someone who calls himself "Death."


Thank joos! I really appreciate it!!

--Mion
WishitwasU
WishitwasU
Jan 20, 2010 14:32
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Hello I was wondering if you could read my stories. Please tell me what you think. I Time Travel For Love.
blanca480
blanca480
Jan 06, 2010 22:28
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Hey I was wondering if you’d check out some of my stories and tell me what you think 

Golidggers :: Dramatic teen story, with a unique storyline, sort of funny :: 'Goldigga' is a term used to describe people who are in relationships but only for money or materialistic benefits. Elle is well aware of this; she's becoming perfect little Goldigga herself. But she's never met a true Goldigga since her mum died...

Fighting the vampires :: mainly a dramatic type of thing, sort of funny :: I want to go. Nobody can stop me. I want my name to be heard in every familiar hall, in every vampire society along with my fathers. My name is Echo, and that's what I want it to do, echo everywhere possible. I promised to him, and if I die, there's nothing for me to live for anyway. I've done nothing but get ready to go since he died, to leave everything behind to for this. For him. I'm prepared...I think...to go fight...the vampires...

Death itself has a beautifully dire consequence :: Vampire mystery/love story, not sort of funny :: Every action you make in life has a consequence. A consequence is either good or bad depending on the action fulfilled. Most people will learn from the consequences of their actions and live a different way. My action was stupid and my consequence will haunt me physically and mentally forever, but there's nothing I can do about it.

You can chose whatever you’d like best, or not look at all. Up to you, happy watting XD
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Roroxxx
Roroxxx
Dec 30, 2009 14:50
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hi, would you mind reading my story, i would love some constructive criticism and what you think about it

"All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls

Synopsis:

Aliza is in a binding situation, literally! With her breasts constricted, wearing her brother's loose clothing, and dropping her voice to the lowest level, she's attending Ascham, an all boy's school! If that's not enough, throw in an extremely hot roommate, who suspects Aliza, aka Alex, of not being exactly what "he" appears to be and you have a chaotic relationship---if you can even call it that.
http://www.wattpad.com/257206-quot-all-boys-school-survival-guide-quot-for-girls
maryasha
maryasha
Dec 14, 2009 07:31
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