Heya, I know you're already a fan and all and I shouldn't be pestering you, but could you check out my new story:

The Secrets of Port Alley Creek
Summary:
Six kids, a jock, a prep, a loner, an athlete, a nerd, a goth, not your typical best friends, each thinking they received an invitation from the other, head on a plane ride to Hawaii. On the plane, the moment they realize none of them sent the invitations, the plane has a sudden crash. The next time they come into consciousness, there was no plane, but a map leading them to Port Alley Creek, a regular school aside from the fact that there is no electricity and it was damn smack in the middle of no where. However they soon uncover the eerie fact, there's 5 buildings on campus and 4 on the map?! A misprint...or not? Together, the gang puts aside their differences and band together to uncover the mysteries of Port Alley Creek. But what happens when they discover the culprit with the invitations is still among them?

It's submitted in the Mystery/Suspense contest so I really want constructive criticism and yeah, so please? :D
I'd really really appreciate it if you do :)

xx
With love,
--Mion

Heya, I know you're already a fan and all and I shouldn't be pestering you, but could you check out my new story:

The Secrets of Port Alley Creek
Summary:
Six kids, a jock, a prep, a loner, an athlete, a nerd, a goth, not your typical best friends, each thinking they received an invitation from the other, head on a plane ride to Hawaii. On the plane, the moment they realize none of them sent the invitations, the plane has a sudden crash. The next time they come into consciousness, there was no plane, but a map leading them to Port Alley Creek, a regular school aside from the fact that there is no electricity and it was damn smack in the middle of no where. However they soon uncover the eerie fact, there's 5 buildings on campus and 4 on the map?! A misprint...or not? Together, the gang puts aside their differences and band together to uncover the mysteries of Port Alley Creek. But what happens when they discover the culprit with the invitations is still among them?

It's submitted in the Mystery/Suspense contest so I really want constructive criticism and yeah, so please? :D
I'd really really appreciate it if you do :)

xx
With love,
--Mion

Hey,
I just wanted to say (If I havent before)
Thank you soooooo much for becoming a fan...:D
Means the world to me (Seriously!)
Luv Bev...xxx
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hey,

just stopping by to thank you for becoming a fan.....
so, thank you... and i really appreciate it and hope you enjoy my writing..

xoxox Katelyn

thanks 4 becoming a fan :)

Loves xxx

Thanks for fanning (:

--Mion

hey would u mind reading my newly posted story?? i dont have a name for it yet any recommendations? i'd really appreciate it if u read it and tell me what u think ;)