"Never trust a blueberry." - About Time (2013)

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My Lucky Pick

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Description: Hello, this is the new and improved version of the old My Lucky Pick. Thank the lord! To be honest with you, I don't like the title but it's original and it suits so I'm going to use it. :) Um obviously just don't copyright, simple as that. I don'...

The repetitive nature of the story is what got to me. Also, killing all the character off also became repetitive but it was different as not many other authors would kill off as many characters as you do. Which Isn't necessarily a bad thing but I wanted to get to know Zane better. (He seemed so nice). Anyways! I really think rewriting this is a great idea and I know i'll definitely be coming back to reread it.