ah ! someone to be my thunder.***
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Below i felt would be a good response poem... thanks for the inspiration, take what you want from it.
In the morning it rains near my wooden frame, the moon laughs at me as it fades away. I don't wanna care about life it is fleeting vanity. But with the veil of time, iI'm look for the rain to pour on the field of my heart, so that new birds would rise, and the lion of old would come near. I take life awkardly, it seems time is a jaded jar, ready to fall apart, friends are fake and arrogant. Teachers tell me something I already perceived five years ago, I'm looking for the rain that will clear quench my desires of a holy land, a new land a new adventure. I'm looking for the rain that searches my soul, and bring me life, someone be my thunder.
:/ ... I think your gonna rock at life. You have vision and hopes, and burning desire to do good, you are kind and honest. Don't fear.
this is sweet and wistful
... this is good
I like where this is going
this was startling, I wish I had a therapist like this in my teenage years, lol. All mine were quacks or drug dealers, lol not really. But they had no real solution to anything except medication. Great story so far. I really like this.