I'm a writer, poet a best, a lover, a Christian. My name is Aaron. I play sports, basketball, roller hockey, baseball you name it, save swimming. I write music, and love people. I'm energetic, strong and imaginative. I am a writer. 

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Like A Rose - The Warrior On The Mountain

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Lily of the Sunrise 
Like a Rose - The Warrior In the Garden
  • Location:
    Corpus Christi, Texas
  • Joined:
    4 years ago

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58 Published Works

Featured work.

Like A Rose

Social data: 217 reads. 16 votes. 10 comments.

Description: A lover's dark past meets the peak of a new dawn. Your eyes will be amazed. The strength of a fine warrior and man, writes his story when he met his beloved.

#912 in Poetry

Other Works by acmercury91.
The Night

The Night

32 5 8

The beauty of all things, the starlight, the pleasures, the warmth.

The Dawn of the Moonlight

The Dawn of the Moonlight

50 3 2

Lily of the Sunrise

Lily of the Sunrise

83 9 7

Bounded with words of beauty, grace, and kindness



167 12 13

this  one had more structure, and definitely more fluid. Don't be tricked Meg.... just because you get comments doesn't your less important. Look for quality, the people who care, and not just a fluffy comment to make you happy. There's sometimes needed work to be done so that people discover you. But don't make it your highest priority. Learn to love others first, Encourage, their goals, hope, work with another.  Help parents in the house, listen to people, just start with a few others around you. There's so much to life other than, the neighbor's cute smile. You need to be loved like a heartaches needs sugar. My dear, be patient. Hold down your thirsts, work to do quality work, don't be so troubled by others.

ehhh, well it was a good journal.... When I judge for "good" poetry. I look for moral content, technique, and clarity.

It's not the best way to judge things, but i feel 1 moral statement stands louder than a thousand cries. Morality gives your poetry weight, contrast/symmetry, understanding light, hues, and even color. 

What you have here is cry from your heart. Rejection, fear, hatred, confusion. These feelings happen everyday.  It happens to me. It happens to Joe, Amy, Jim, and Shelly. It happens to everyone. 

Poetry is defined as outrcy for hope, but i feel like you turned this into heavy illustrious journal of feelings.  

What I would have done differently, is find a picture coffee and table. And describe the relationship based on this.

The coffee sits next to you, 
Three crooked smiles turn me round. 
I fell in love here, but you broke me down.
I drink your words like alcohol and blues, 
   - Do you mistake me for fool? 

I'm mad for you, like a papercut in the skin, 
 your friends smile like a clown, 
 words drip like water, girls are always around, 
digging into your good looks, you shark- 
   -  Your nothing but a reptile, oh sin. 

I miss you, wait your worse than Capone,
  you take me down, I"ll turn this table around. 
Your a punk, unintelligent, ditz, leave me alone. 
 Your smile's fake, no, Thanks. I'll turn you down. 
   - I take your single? No, you just got friend-zoned.