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Guardian Redemption

Social data: 23.2K reads. 643 votes. 296 comments.

Description: Cleon is terrible at being a Guardian. He's supposed to protect humanity—whatever that means—with his jaw-dropping magical prowess, but there’s a problem: his magic doesn't work. While the other Guardian, Kairi, whips up infernos at will, he...


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YuffieProductions commented on Guardian Redemption - I - Mental Problems


YuffieProductions
@Hope-Adon Thank you so much for the insightful review! All your edits are helpful, and I'll make those changes once I start the next draft. 

As for Cleon not being a Guardian anymore, he could still be in the army despite not having a Guardian title. I'll go back and clarify that. 

I'll clarify the connection. Just for your information, it can be muted (they can put defenses around their thoughts and hide them), but sometimes if the emotions are really strong, it's hard to do that. It's like being in the same room as someone, and they're talking. Sometimes you can ignore them and zone them out, but other times you can't help but eavesdrop no matter how hard you try. Kairi's thoughts are being very "noisy" right now, so Cleon's having a hard time shutting her out. 

Thanks again for your suggestions! I'm excited you enjoyed this and didn't find it a train-wreck. :)


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