Hey, I was wondering if you could read my first attempt on a Greek story. I decided to write about something new on wattpad instead of another vampire story even though we all love them (although it does include them but in a totally different context) I would love some feedback, criticisms welcome
It’s called: The Immoral Darkness
Cassie has watched the entrapment of her mother before her eyes from the very people she lives with…Greek Gods. Since that night, a lot has changed; she finds out that she is the reincarnated Greek goddess Aphrodite who is now on the run from the most powerful being…. Zeus. Aphrodite is the Greek god of love and a romance unfolds whilst her run from Zeus. She discovers many powers that endanger her at some points but she is Aphrodite, she somehow comes out of it unscathed. She is trying to go against the written prophecy, but will she leave the hands of her beloved citizens of an entirely different kingdom all to the rising darkness?
hey
i wass wondering if you had time if you would please read my story
"i thought i was human, that i had a normal life until....i met my real father"
you dont have to but it would be nice if you could and tell me what you think thanks - puddsta123
Heyy!! If You get the chance would you mind checking out my stories?
He's Cocky, Hes' Mean, He's My Pet Panther;
Clarke, used to be a normal teenage, or so she thought, until she got involved with some sex deprived boys who turn into panthers when they got "excited"!
Before Autumn:
Autumn has taken the responsibility of being the heir of the most powerful kingdom in the known world ever since her brother died. Now reaching the age of 16, she's about to get married off along with her 2 sisters, her youngest sister who suffers from a unstable ability to read minds is getting married to a power hunger, cocky manipulator of a prince, Gaven. She's determined to get rid of Gaven before he can do harm, but what happens when she wounds up falling for him herself?!
An Idiot's Guide to Love:
Him: A cocky, arrogant, pessimistic jock who has dated almost all the girls from New York to California.
Her: A girl who has her nose in everyone's business, she's loud mouth, tough- never been in a relationship before,and- a fresh fish in a sea of sharks.
They: Wound up as partners for a assignment assigned by a bizarre teacher!
Wait For Me:
"Wait For Me" Jemmy whispers to Kris. Eight years later without him, she tries to fit in at her high school, with the rich girls and the jocks. Spring dance comes up, though Kris can't seem to let go of Jemmy she is offered to go out with Chris, the popular Jock. After seeing a figure in her dreams, and a drop of blood on her pillow Kris is sent to therapy, where she meets a 16 year old therapist Rey Stane. Suddenly entering her life Rey and his secretary Luna enter Kris's high school, what will her boyfriend, Chris think? And whats the truth behind Jemmy?
House of Gods: Daughter of Death summary:
Rhea has always been the sarcastic mature "emo" girl, one faithful day when her best friend leaves her and she undergoes another moment of humiliation, overwhelmed with anger that she had kept inside her for years, Rhea unconsciously ends up killing all her classmates and is acquainted with someone who calls himself "Death."
Hey!
thnx for reading my story,ill try and upload soon(coz unfortunetly i have all the later chapters written already,its just the early chapters i never gave much thought too xD)
And also, i hope u continue on with ur story i really think the character of Karma has ALOT of potential
peace,
TLS
Hey I was wondering would you check out my stories. I personally like Goldiggers or Fighting the Vampires best though, u can pick or not look at all. Up to you, thanks anyway
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