I'm 19, live in East Texas, yes I use the word Ya'll(s) a lot, no I don't ride a horse to school, or even own a horse. We're not all riding off into the sunset on our trusty steeds. I've been told I'm too wise for my age, and that I've been blessed with wisdom, but I think I just watch too much Star Wars. (Yoda, teacher he is.) I am in love with The Flash. Seriously, The Flash is the best comic book character ever. (Have you SEEN the tv show?!) I am highly creative. I've done stage/set design for theatre and short film, professional photography, special effects makeup, makeup in general, painting, drawing, writing, music, voice acting, acting, played the trumpet, made jewelry, heck I have a craft box with everything from sculpt clay to graph paper so I'm fully prepared for anything. I get bored easily, so I'm always jumping around from one hobby to the next. (right now I'm working on building a baby crib for a friend) So yea... I've had a hand in just about everything from arts to agriculture. Currently decided if I should take up on that judge's offer and go to law school or get a PH.D in Psychology... Oh I have a calico named Nazi(I hated her at the time) and an orange tabby named Mufasa. Write on my Worldwall! http://www.yourworldoftext.com/~LynnFalcon/ShelbysWonderland The Insane Trilogy Website http://theinsanetrilogy.weebly.com/index.html Please check out the 2012 Emerald Awards winner: http://www.wattpad.com/3042321-the-chronicles-of-protan-the-shadowed-man-book-1/intro Please check out the 2013 Emerald Awards Winner: http://www.wattpad.com/story/6399041-dancing-in-the-red DO YOU LOVE FANFICTION AND CONTESTS ABOUT THOSE FANFICTIONS?! http://www.movellas.com My Instagram: originalshelby
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Description: Gambling addict Amelia Walker was orphaned at a young age, and was never told anything about her true parents. Without the knowledge of her past, she doesn't realize the dangers of the world around her, even the dangers of the eerie Crowley Brothers...
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Okay so I'm about to open PRIVATE graphic requests. This means that only followers are allowed to request, and it will be done over PM. I'm also only offering covers. In order to apply for a cover please respond to this update. I will only be taking on three at a time. So far two slots are already reserved to @CallMeMelody and @Katrocks247. Now that I have the time (finals are over, Christmas stuff hasn't started up yet) I can actually focus on it. The reason for this is because I'm looking up graphic designing techniques from professional book jacket/cover designers. I will be dedicated a lot of this time to reading, listening, and learning from those who are willing to help me. I will post a thread in the Multimedia Club with the completed covers for feedback purposes only. This thread will be open for anyone that is willing to give some kind of feedback that can help me improve. The occasional "I love it! Wonderful! awesome!" is nice and all, but I really need to improve to a professional level. That's what I'm working towards. You MUST respond to THIS message if you want to apply. No PMs or other comments on my profile.
@theskyseemsblue if only, haha. This was for a contest... that never had a winner... xD
Mufasa is such a bully! If only it didn't cost me over $80 to get him fixed, I'd take away his manhood right now if it meant he'd go back to being the lovable cat he was when I saved him! D:<
Hey! When you're completely free (and not a moment before) to make covers, please let me know because if I remember, I still have another cover. However, it makes me a little :( to see that you're going through a tough time. It happens to everyone, I know, but I still hate to see people down. So yeah, if you ever need someone to talk to, feel free to message me. Oh and idk if you're this kind of person, but sugar, netflix and music always makes me feel better. xx
Hello everyone! In celebration of me hitting 900 votes I picked a random follower and shared the love! Please go check out @greenseedless and help her out with her story! She's a new writer and we should encourage her to continue to improve! She has great ideas and just needs to support to get her where she wants to be! Next I'll be doing the same thing with my 350th follower! Let's share the love and encourage those who follow us! We owe them a lot after all!
It looks like you spaced everything out in order to make your short story look longer page wise. Calm down! Short stories can get more pages easily! Your case is a quick fix! You can add more descriptions and slow things down. What does this main character of yours look like? What about her sister? If she knows nothing of her past life, then is the name she calls herself by her real one or a made-up one for the sake of sanity? If you slow down and go back to describe these things to us readers, then your story will get longer. Also don't separate things mid sentence! I noticed it was a kind of pattern... like every two lines it moved to another line. I don't know if you did this intentionally or not, but it needs to be fixed for smooth reading! I really did like this story, I just wish I could savor it and have the chance to not just like it, but fall in love with it! I hope you don't take my advice lightly, but you could throw it away if you wanted to it's your choice! Thank you for writing such a great short story for me to read! :D
Three comments just on the basics of the story! Phew! Sorry I'm giving you a lot to read but I truly am trying to help as much as I can! Let me correct my last suggestion real quick... "Whether she believes in the myths she's told or the truth she sees, she will need to decide quickly if she is to save those who claim to need her." Hope that makes more sense."^ ^ This shows she needs to decide if she is going to fight for the Light Kingdom or not, and shows that id she doesn't she will be putting a lot of lives on the line. So all together the summary would look like this: "Azure DeMarco was trained to kill, and the lack of memories from her previous life won't interfere with her mission. While out in the field she is faced with questions that make her wonder who she was before she was born to this dangerous life. (Those who claim to be from her past approach her with a great battle, one that might be too much for her to handle.) Whether she believes in the myths she's told or the truth she sees, she will need to decide quickly if she is to save those who claim to need her." Alright! I hope this helps you out summary and title wise! Like I said PM me if you are interested in a cover! Now off to read your work and comment on that as well!