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WafaaMuslimah commented on Save Me, Daddy - Prologue

The story line is quite interesting, I think it's enough to pull in a reader interested in this genre.

The grammar needs some work, but not too bad over all.

The prologue as a whole was comprehendible and well thought out with a little more time spent on improving it and maybe rephrasing some things would make it more appealing. xD

p.s. I don't know if this would be helpful but your prologue (and epilogue, if you choose to do one) can be in a different type of narrative perspective  (i.e. first, second, third person etc.) to the rest of the novel. hope this helps!