Status: Planing to update Twisted Jane soon with some plot changes at the end, don't hate me if you don't like it. :) (1 week ago)
| Location | USA |
| Birthday | Oct 18 |
| Member Since | Apr 24, 2012 |
| Votes Received | 636 |
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I write a lot, pretty much every day. I have blog, called: thebookhomegirl I started my first book, Twisted Jane about a month ago. If you have any questions just ask. Leave a comment, even if you hate my work, just tell me why. Thanks for checking out my work. :)
Goals:
Reads: (3-20-13)> 3000[x] ()> 5000[]
Votes : 25[x] 50[x] 100[x] 200[x] 500[x] 1000[]
Fans : 25[x] 50[x] 100[] 250[]
Let me know what you think. Comments and criticisms welcomed!
Highest Ranking:
Dark Poetry's: Poetry#: 48 Other#: 28 Spiritual #: 20
Short Stories: Other#: 248 Short Story#: 259
Poetry's: Other#: 101 Poetry#: 115
Angel Eyes: Other#: 227
Christmas Never: Short Story #:228 Other #:219
Poetry - 2: Other #: 227 Poetry #: 363
The Suicide: Other #:13 Poetry#: 30 Horror#: 31
Twisted Jane:Mystery #::102 Fantasy #:30
If you ask for a critique
- I will be honest.
- I don't do fan fiction. Works
 | Twisted JaneJane's past has always been shaded with dark and twisted tales. Searching for answers to the mysteries of her family's past only leads to more questions about her future. If ... read more 3,723 reads  277  230 |
 | The SuicideA collection of poems about life, death and happiness. 1,496 reads 54 65 |
 | Poems10 parts / 2 pages, updated Sep 05, 2012 Atty's poetry collection (2012). 246 reads 18 15 |
 | Christmas Never Again 1 page, updated Aug 22, 2012 A young mother faces and incredible challenge at Christmas. 63 reads 12 11 |
 | Dark PoemsThis is a collection of darker poems I will be adding to it. Hope you enjoy. 1,387 reads 107 97 |
 | Short StoriesUnedited short stories. I will be posting the updated version soon. Thanks for reading. 379 reads 35 31 |
 | Angel Eyes 67 reads 5 10 |
 | Raindrop (A shape poem) 258 reads 5 5 |
 | PoetryThis is a short collection of eight poems. I hope you will enjoy. 1,504 reads 109 127 |
 | The BridgeVanthian is alone in the world. The love of his life was murdered by the jealous Lord Darthinal, now he is running for his life. Searching for closure and fighting for revenge. 31 reads 2 0 |
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BassietRebel
2 weeks ago
Sure ill check it out :)
1 month ago
Hi there, Thank you for your comment about my friend. It is not your fault and I know she has reported it, I told her about it. Thanks so much for showing your concern.
TommyGirl
1 month ago
What do you all think about me updating the cover of Twisted Jane? Do you think I should get one that matches the banner and profile background? Message me or comment and tell me what you think! Thanks.
Darkmeetslight
1 month ago
Hey x can you read my book 'Anonymous' please it would mean the world x
TommyGirl
1 month ago
Wow! Twisted Jane just made 3000 reads and I am so excited! Thank you all for your support!
TommyGirl
2 months ago
@realjeffseymour I'll do that, hope everything goes well for you. :)
realjeffseymour
2 months ago
@TommyGirl Thanks! Glad to hear it. I'll see if I can get 'round to your book as well. Keep an eye out for the next set of critiques! Things are pretty busy for me right now (I'm getting all my ducks in a row to publish a short story collection next month), but I hope to squeeze some in soon. :-)
TommyGirl
2 months ago
@realjeffseymour No problem, I'm looking forward to reading your book. Thanks, Twisted Jane has really been doing well and I'm super excited. I'm sure your busy, but if you have a chance check it out and see what you think, I narrowly missed your free critique in the forum. :) Thanks so much for stopping by.
realjeffseymour
2 months ago
@TommyGirl Hey! Just wanted to say thanks for following. Congrats on the success of Twisted Jane! I hope you've had a chance to check out my books a bit, and that they're treating you well. :-)
TommyGirl
2 months ago
Thanks to all my amazing fans for taking Twisted Jane past 2000 reads! I'm so grateful for your support and enthusiasm. Thanks. :)
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@KimFry Thanks so much for the feedback, I will bare this in mind when I start editing. It's always good to know where I can improve.Twisted Jane
@fairyfree Thanks as always for your support and feedback, it has been invaluable. :)
Twisted Jane
@TheUltimateSin@GloveA Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment, hope you'll get a chance to check out some of my other work.
The Suicide
The story idea is really good and sounds interesting. There's a lot of changing POV which is a bit confusing. You are also missing punctuation...
Next? (Shadow Hunting)
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