About me:
I'm an nineteen-year-old who's currently studying at Waterloo and damn is this place cold (lived my whole life in a really hot place and only saw real snow here the first time in eighteen years). I'm the silent quiet type of girl who doesn't know how to approach people and suck at social interaction. But if I may say so, I do have a pretty wild side which I hardly/don't know how to show.

My type of story? I love fantasy/sci fi, anything that surpasses reality--'cause reality sucks. Or at least, the world of fiction wins reality anytime. You're welcome to ask me to read your story, but I'm a picky, picky reader. I look for originality/good plot and good grammar. Don't ask me to check out your story if you're not prepared to take blunt words.

*My older stories have tons of grammar mistakes, excuse them if you decide to check them out.
I'm not going back to edit them because I'm constantly learning new things, and I don't want to fix up the mistake only to realize later on there were more I could've fixed.

If you wanna talk to me, about anything really, inbox me. I'll respond as soon as I can ^_^

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5 Published Works

Featured work.

The Deal with the Demon Prince

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Description: A hundred and seventeen years ago, a demon offered a girl who was on the verge of death a deal. Having no other choices, she accepted and gained an almost immortal body. It was only when she got it that she discovered that immortality is nothing but...


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The_Black_Butterfly commented on The Legend - Chapter Three

Rose last name as in they're related? :O
      I liked the first chapter. The second and third felt like they went a bit too quick, and the banter between Red and the main character seem a bit strange considering they've literally just met! I mean, that's uh kind of rude and just strikes me as unusual. (So obvious they'll end up together heh)
      There are parts that I felt were a bit info dumping and the main character's thoughts don't seem natural. Other parts, like the wolf and her having a kettle just seem random since the setting and transition from places to places wasn't obvious. Also, longer chapters would be a lot better. There is a lot to expand on!
      I do like the writing. It's easy to read, which is really good when it's a story. Best of luck and I hope I didn't come off as too rude with the critiquing