DareYouToMovee
1 month ago

That sounds chaotic! D: And I'm doing fine, I'm just busy with schoolwork as well. I just started writing again. :)

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ItalieMalie
1 month ago

It had to be at least two and a half years ago, hnnng. So long. I was a sophomore in high school and now I would be graduating (if I hadn't dropped out).

And thank you for your suggestions for edits! That's mostly why I'm posting it on here. What I'm writing now is fairly bare-bones since it's for NaNo, but I really do appreciate suggestions for future edits. I'm going to be doing a lot of those.

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DareYouToMovee
1 month ago

Hey! How are you doing?

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ItalieMalie
1 month ago

Hi Minnow! It's nice to see you again!

And agreed, it does seem like inkpop was a long time ago. :( But I guess things have changed. Including The Stolen! It's a considerably different story, a lot darker for example, and the characters have changed a bit. Also it's narration has changed some. But it was awesome to see you pop up on my radar after commenting on TS and I just wanted to stop by to say hi and thank you!

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DareYouToMovee
10 months ago

Yeah, that's the way I am. I mean, I wouldn't mind showing my writing to certain people...it's just that I know in the end, it'd be more than just them seeing it. That and I would NEVER want them to see how social I am on these sites. I'm pretty bad. :P Although not as bad lately.

And sure I'll help you out! :)

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HaileyMeloy13
10 months ago

I'm glad you liked the newest chapter. :) I'll be posting the next in a few days.

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YuffieProductio...
10 months ago

Hey, Minnow! Actually, I take that back. Please don't worry about critiquing TEoS right now. It's not my priority, and it's basically breaking every rule in the book and is just a very shoddy piece of writing. I'll do a major revision of it much later, so don't waste your time with it. Thank you so much for the offer, though. :) 

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YuffieProductio...
10 months ago

Thanks so much for the comment, Minnow! :D I'm so happy to hear you've been reading TEoS, and I'm really glad to hear from you. 

Shaun is one of my favorites. ^__^ I absolutely love him. 

Ahhh I see what you mean about the Thug Ball. Do you have suggestions on how to make it more gangstery? I've never even been to a club or party before.... so I was completely making it up from my own imagination. :p 

If you'd like to go more indepth, I'd be most grateful. (Don't waste time with grammar/sentence structure, though, since I know that's terrible. I'll be doing a much more detailed revision of all that after I finish writing the entire book.)

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DareYouToMovee
10 months ago

Yeah, not many people have read my writing in real life. Nobody knows about my current story, and I'm pretty sure I want to keep it that way. xD It's like you're being judged for your writing when you show it to people in real life.

I've never seen Star Wars. :P It's from Switchfoot, just like my last username! :D

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HaileyMeloy13
11 months ago

Hi Minnow! This is an embarrassingly late response - college and general issues from life got in the way. 

I'm glad you like Shiro and Jules (i like them too!), and as for NaN, i am still working on it. Right now, however, it's in the 'hibernating' phase. I need to leave it alone for a while and salvage its story line before i go back to working on it. 

Shiro and Jules's story (Cross the Devil) Has been updated by the way. I'm working on that book again now that life has calmed down, and my horrific block has dies a slow and painful death. 

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