Tempestian
7 months ago

@_borderlineCRAZY sure lol. I know it probably doesn't make sense right at the moment but having a talent that breathes what is called a soul into a story is a rare thing.  You definitely have it though it is kind of raw at the  moment.  I tend to get a head of myself sorry about that. It's up to you where you take your story but it wouldn't surprise me if you do finish it that it will some day be published, because of that rare quality it has. Im not saying it'll necessarily be a best seller but so far it looks like it has that potential to be internationally recognised. Btw the smartest thing you could do is give it time specially if you hit a wall, the more you force it the more likely you'll hate it. The only thing I could suggest if you do hit a wall is let your readers know, don't mess with a reader. Last but not least, pay more attention to reads then votes... Society today doesn't have time for votes but reading it does. It's not the votes that tell you if your story is liked it's the reads first then the comments votes shouldn't even be considered. Take the kpop group super junior and their song Mr simple for example 64million bits on YouTube, 100k plus likes  it's  the hits that tell you the songs liked before the likes. The truth is you'll always get haters  no matter what, it's how well you ignore them that will see your story go far so goodluck let me know when you want me to start editing.

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_borderlineCRAZ...
7 months ago

@Tempestian you kind of lost me for a minute there, but thankfully i found my way back and i've understood fully everything you've said especially the part where you said you would also be honored to be my editor, (so what if you're not a professional, i mean, i just turned sixteen, i'm no professional either. i'm kind of looking forward in the future on the part where i crash down and burn and end up living with my cousin as a freeloader. because that would be pretty sweet.) and i guess i'm also guilty about that  whole blowing up about my story sucking but i just give it time, like two months tops. i look at the votes and i look at the reads and i'm like "i would ultimately suck if i dont continue this, but i still gots no idea on what i want to happen next so i'm just gonna go sit in the dark and concentrate" or something sort of like that. okay so i'm babbling. its i cant whip out stuff like stories having souls like you, if it were me i would have used 'content' or something appropriate . anyho i'm just saying are we go on you becoming my editor?

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Tempestian
7 months ago

 @_borderlineCRAZY continuing lol.... While a story doesn't have to have soul in it to be a good read, it does if people want that read to be remembered. To tell the difference between a soul story and a non soul story ask yourself these questions:
1. Does it make me laugh, cry, get angry etc?
If no; do I still read it even if doesn't have emotion?
2. Is this something I would normally read?
if no: am I enjoying this read so far?
If yes: does it suck me in or am I still aware of the world.around me?(this is often the number one way to tell weather a story has soul or not, weather it sucks you in or not and that itch to keep picking it up and reading it again until it's done and then that urge to reread it again and again). It's this reason Harry potter was popular amongst the ages, it has soul, I read each book at least 32 times a piece. Twilight is conflicting for me because while the story has soul it has a copied soul. A copied soul isn't really a soul story it's a stolen soul don't get me wrong the content of the story line is the authors but if you take away the Romeo and Juliet theme with the forbidden love to it you have one heck of a boring story. It can be noted by the host series, God I'm sorry but that was boring. I got to chapter three and have it a way as a bad joke. This is another way of knowing if a story has soul or not. The fact that your story made me break my own rule is evident to what your talent is. I look forward to watching it grow.

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Tempestian
7 months ago

@_borderlineCRAZY oh wow... That's wow. Lol sorry I'm... Rather speechless. I don't mind editing it though I'm not a professional, though im confident I could edit it and do that editing justice. Are you ok with that? If so I would be honored to help you out. And don't worry lol you write rest well. Im a but worried about hour though. If you ever start to dislike your own story talk to me first please. The reason why I ask is becausE the other say, an author I respected discredited her own work and her readers and until she had blown up at us readers I was fully into her stories. I get what she mental that she thought it had to have sexual content.in order for the story to get read, however that isn't the case it had what I call mild sexual content, which means those scenes were steamy without needing all the details and it was believable. But that wasn't the reason why she got readers, she got readers because well the emotions.and story had that realistic feel to it, much like yours does. It's a rare talent to have, being able to put a "soul" into a story like that and until she blew up at us fans I loved reading her stories, I loved the idea that she could have gone far even famously so, if she had of asked first instead of blowing up and melting down first. At the same time I feel sorry for her, she had a real talent for writing but now that she has discredited herself like that she's not only lost readers but also any chance she had of making it big without having to struggle to get.there. Your probably wondering why im telling you this, it's because you have that same talent, it's a very rare talent to have. And while yours is still developing it's still giving your stories an added edge. Now let me just tell you, I don't read your stories cause of the steamyness I read it because it's got that realistic soul to it, where it feels real. I've read thousands of books in my life but yet I can only name a dozen that had a soul in them. Don't get me wrong a story doesn't

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_borderlineCRAZ...
7 months ago

i fixed it. at least i think i've fixed it. i'd like to think i've fixed it. and i updated...please still read it...i really appreciate your comments and i really do try my best to give you my best. and i would be HONORED to have you as my editor. would you please be my editor?

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TheAlbinoWizard...
10 months ago

Tempestian, I never said that Chris was werewolve, you proabaly miss-read it or something. The reason as to why thier emotion's keep changing is really because he wasn't going to be a player then reject his mate. I wanted to make the story to show the relationship not a rejection like most stories. It's all very confusing, I understand, but I'm working on fixing it now. Everything is always confusing in the beginging and Dominik is just trying to put his mate in the right place,vice versa. I'm sorry if you won't keep reading. 

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psdoffhby
11 months ago

Thanks for fanning. I really appreciate it and I hope you enjoy the fantasies. Please read, vote and comment. Request are also welcomed. 

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nima-love
1 year ago

Thanks for addidng my story to your reading list =)

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dezy9318
1 year ago

Thank you for becoming a fan of mine, I will try not to disappoint you or any of my other fans. I will try my hardess to constantly have my fans enjoy my stories, and I do hope I do not disappoint you all. Please comment me on my stories if you wish to give me any advice or any such thing. I really do love it when my fans tell me what I can do to make their reading experiance the best. Thank you for reading! :)

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weetwifan
1 year ago

Hiya thanks so much for fanning ease tell me what u think about my stories thanks :) x

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