Status: Both stories on hold. :( Sorry! But i just uploaded a new short story that i wrote for english! So enjoy. (1 month ago)

Superstar08

Name Who want's to know? :)
Location Dauntless Faction
Member Since Dec 28, 2011
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"Think before you do", with that you can save lives. Just keep that in mind.

I went to a party mum,
I remembered what you said.
You told me not to drink,
Mum, so i drank soda instead.
I really felt proud inside, mum.
The way you said i would.
I didnt drink and drive mum.
Even though the others said i should.
I know you were always right.
Now the party is is finaly ending mum,
As everyone is driving out of sight.
As i got into my car, mum.
I knew id get home in one piece.
Because of the way you raised me.
So responsible and sweet.
I started to drive away mum.
But as i pulled out into the road.
The other guy didnt see me mum.
And hit me like a load.
As i lay there on the pavement mum.
I hear the police man say.
'the other guy is drunk' mum.
And now i am the one who will pay.
Im lying here dying mum...
I wish you'd get here soon.
How could this happen to me mum?
My life just burst like a balloon.
There is blood all around me mum.
And most of it is mine.
I hear the medice say, mum,
Ill die in a short time.
I just wanted to tell you, mum.
I swear i didnt drink.
It was the others mum.
The others didnt think.
He was probably at the same party as i.
The only difference is, he drank.
And i will die.
Why do people drink mum?
It can ruin your whole life.
Im feeling sharp pains now.
Pains Just like a knife.
the guy who hit me is walking mum.
And i dont think its fair.
Im lying here dying and all he can do is stare.
Tell my brother not to cry mum.
Tell daddy to be brave.
And when i go to heaven mum.
Put 'GOOD BOY' on my grave.
Someone should have told him mum.
Not to drink and drive.
If only they had told him mum.
I would still be alive.
My breath is getting shorter mum.
Im beconing very scared.
Please dont cry for me mum.
When i needed you, you were always there.
I have got one last question mum.
Before i say goodbye.
I didnt drink and drive.
So why am i the one to die? How would you feel if you took someones life?

Works

Trusting Online

Trusting Online

4 pages, updated Mar 27, 2013PGCompleted
A short story i wrote for english. Its about a girl who trusts someone online and then that guy comes back and throws it in her face when he meets her in real life. He figured out who she was, but she had no idea. Enjoy.
11 reads votes 3 comments 3
Lonely Girl (Student/Teacher)

Lonely Girl (Student/Teacher)

6 parts / 13 pages, updated Nov 28, 2012PG
Kirsty Parker has tried to put her life on track after her parents were killed in a car accident, she keeps thinking she could've done something else. Then Kir... read more
1,128 reads votes 38 comments 18
After One Day

After One Day

9 parts / 24 pages, updated Nov 28, 2012PG
Katniss Everdeen has a hard life, when her parents are mudered by Carter when she was 16 she wanted revenge. But before she could move her next door neighbour and best frien... read more
609 reads votes 33 comments 53

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FireGoesDown
FireGoesDown

1 month ago
Okay, I'm near crying after I read your profile. Are you trying to make the world cry? Like seriously, the words got to me like no other :'( But I agree 100% and I just had to say that :) xx
TurningANewPage
TurningANewPage

1 month ago
Luv ur books btw!
TurningANewPage
TurningANewPage

1 month ago
Not trying to be mean or anything, but I would just like to point out that your location should be 'Faction' not Fraction... 
girloftreachery
girloftreachery

1 month ago
Hello hun! Mind to follow me back? Thank you! xoxo <3
fan back? plz
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Dream_girl99

2 months ago
plz fan back :)
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Kels899

2 months ago
Thanks for fanning mee!!
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3 months ago
Thanks for fanning meh!! xD
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tallonstar

5 months ago
your fans with towritehope? haha she's like my sister! lol that's kinda funny:)
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BooksandRoses

5 months ago
thank you so much for fanning back, it means a lot. I love your profile and background pictures and I honestly think you and your work are incredible!

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@xx3Ginaxx3@BrittanyGuidry thanks, i've been busy and had no urge to write, i'll try and if not i'll have to put it on hold, but i dont really...
Lonely Girl (Student/Teacher)

@FireGoesDown Thanks!@Peace_Keeper Well i had to enclude her!
Trusting Online

@GemmaEllenMorley thank you
Lonely Girl (Student/Teacher)

ur welcome
After One Day

@Peace_Keeper u said that for the other one!
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