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SophieRDF

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Please, especially if you hate my work, comment. I want to know exactly WHY you hate it, so I can improve it. I don't get offended by harsh criticism.

Works

Snapshots

Snapshots

1 page, updated Aug 28, 2012
7 reads votes 0 comments 0
Just Give Up

Just Give Up

1 page, updated Aug 22, 2012
48 reads votes 14 comments 18
The Rebel Game

The Rebel Game

1 page, updated Aug 02, 2012PG-13
39 reads votes 4 comments 11
The Wait

The Wait

1 page, updated Aug 01, 2012
36 reads votes 4 comments 9
Gears

Gears

1 page, updated Aug 01, 2012G
tags / cyborg
23 reads votes 2 comments 5
What is Yours

What is Yours

1 page, updated Jan 16, 2012G
29 reads votes 3 comments 6
Their Hands

Their Hands

1 page, updated Dec 25, 2011G
tags / hands race racism
63 reads votes 10 comments 18
Sunset

Sunset

1 page, updated Jul 17, 2011G
tags / poetry
119 reads votes 9 comments 16
People of the Sunrise

People of the Sunrise

2 pages, updated Jun 22, 2011GCompleted
209 reads votes 17 comments 22
Her pace is brisk

Her pace is brisk

1 page, updated Jun 21, 2011G
67 reads votes 5 comments 8

@#!$ I promised to read for R4R


I was wrong
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SophieRDF
SophieRDF

9 months ago
Hi all, 
I don't usually do posts like this, but PLEASE check out the_day_of_abandon and Akea13. They're amazing poets; it'll definately be worthwhile.

http://www.wattpad.com/user/the_day_of_abandon?uploads&page=0
http://www.wattpad.com/user/Akea13
SophieRDF
SophieRDF

10 months ago
@HeyNeasa Thank you so much! I hope I helped.
_OppaGangnamStyle
_OppaGangnamSty...

10 months ago
Thank you so much for giving your input my poem, Infection. I really appreciate the honest criticism! 

You've got yourself a new fan. :)
SophieRDF
SophieRDF

1 year ago
@AstroDove Do you know anyone who can make good covers?
AstroDove
AstroDove

1 year ago
So far everything of yours that i have read was especially good. You should write some descriptions for you stories and add some covers, I was given this advice before myself and it really does help people to notice your posts.
SophieRDF
SophieRDF

1 year ago
@AllThoseNights Thanks!
AllMyHeart
AllMyHeart

1 year ago
heyy i dont know to much about poetry but i read a few of your poems and i really like them! i think youre really good at it and to keep it up!!!
thanks for fanning!! 
SophieRDF
SophieRDF

2 years ago
@ParanormalGeek I wrote a description on the first page of your story. Don't have much to say, though. It's really well written. Thanks for fanning me, by the way!

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POEMS FROM MY NEW BOOK~ POMEGRANATE FLESH published October 2012 http://www.luluThe ParadeAnother Stupid Wattpad RantR.I.P

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@One4August That's great. I'm happy for you too. Straight crushes suck.
Poems for the Romeo & Juliets

@One4August Oh, I'm not subtle about that stuff at all. I told her the day I realized. But I found someone else now.
Poems for the Romeo & Juliets

Again, just grammar: •line 1: breeze isn't a verb, at least not in this context. •lines 2-3: this part doesn'y make much sense to me in general,...
I was wrong

I don't really like poems that use older language with an old form of poetry. It makes it feel like poetry is something frozen in time, instead of...
Fate

Interesting concept, though you kinda overdo the refrain.
I've Been Lying

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