Thank you so much for giving your input my poem, Infection. I really appreciate the honest criticism!
You've got yourself a new fan. :)
@AstroDove Do you know anyone who can make good covers?
So far everything of yours that i have read was especially good. You should write some descriptions for you stories and add some covers, I was given this advice before myself and it really does help people to notice your posts.
@One4August That's great. I'm happy for you too. Straight crushes suck. Poems for the Romeo & Juliets @One4August Oh, I'm not subtle about that stuff at all. I told her the day I realized. But I found someone else now. Poems for the Romeo & Juliets Again, just grammar: •line 1: breeze isn't a verb, at least not in this context. •lines 2-3: this part doesn'y make much sense to me in general,... I was wrong I don't really like poems that use older language with an old form of poetry. It makes it feel like poetry is something frozen in time, instead of... Fate Interesting concept, though you kinda overdo the refrain. I've Been Lying