Ok, THIS chapter i completely loved. I dun really like the first chapter tho :) nice one ^^ Lost Dreamer The endings way too abrupt... Way way too abrupt. You'd expect some more action... This is short. Very short :/ longer book is better. More... Change Dude if ur gonna update enuff before november, u cant afford to wait for ur ransom. So u better start updating!! :) ive alr voted but u gonna wait... Change Nice... For two months nobody was updating their stories, then BAM u update 4 in a go. Atta girl!! Im expecting so much more from u :3 Change