A very promising chapter. A few errors here and there, but your creativity tops it. One thing - At the begging of the chapter you said, Abigail... Evolution (Book 1 of POE ch... A very promising book! Hope you make a sequel or an epilogue :D Great job and very well written! Now get on with chained, PLEWAAASEEE *puppy... SwEeT MaDnEsS (Watty Awards... Oh poor beastie! He killed his love. Now that must be something hard to do. Your description was amazing, explanation of every detail. Thats what... The Beast of Arakan Amazing this time eat their brains out!..I will join you on the war but I will be NATO ;P...Show pride in ones work, actually I need to do that... Idalia Speaks Thats my girl!! Bash these people heads out LOL!...SPOT ON >. Idalia Speaks