what happened to 'change' ?
The things about me I'm sure nobody reads: I'm fifteen, and living in the USA. I have numerous other hobbies beside writing such as drawing, photography, and singing. Also being my weird self, which means being crazy. I would truly love it if you were to look at some of my stories and give me your opinion.
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Description: • sleepwalking • a disorder that occurs when people walk or do another activity while they are still asleep. This is the story of Eliza Bringham, a seventeen year old girl who lives a normal life during the day. However, at night, everything i...
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@Thenutnextdoor Thank you! :D
I can ensure you that you most definitely will! :)
I love the amount imagery you show through out the chapter, and how you show her desire to escape where she is at. You have great detail, and word choice. Overall, this is a very nicely written chapter and I am excited to read more! Also, the music choice really did help make his chapter seem more alive!
@marissa1999c Wow, that's so cool!