Sami

Okay so.... I know I'm not the best writer. In fact I'm not even close. I've been told my story's are hard to follow. There's too many plot lines, it goes to fast, there's too many characters, and it's just plain unoriginal or it's the most creative yet confusing story line ever. I want to try though. I can write, by can I mean physically able, it just may not be the best. I'm not asking anyone who reads this to read my stories. I want you to critique them. Really the only one worth actual reading is Stereotypical Love and that one is co-written with RESweat. Her version had about 120 views and mine has about 35 as of now. It sucks. So please just comment! Read the first line of each story and comment! I need advice, I need help! I'm trying, maybe not as hard as I could, but I am TRYING at least. 
Thanks again to all the people who read this...all four of you!
JK chances are there's like one :) 

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Sami D.