About

Just call me Rim or Rimmie

I believe Jesus Christ is my Saviour. So yeah: I'm Christian.

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Born a Kiwi but with typically Asian parents. Chat me, fellow New Zealanders!

I would much prefer to go under the pen name R.M. Lee and oddly enough it has taken me longer than two years to figure out the pen name I've always dreamed to be writing as. Yep. I'm slow.

Avatar: The Last Airbender. Chuck. Cardcaptor Sakura. W.I.T.C.H. Kim Possible. Once Upon A Time. My favourite shows of all time. Hands down. I'm still a child at heart, I guess.

I highly recommend these movies that I absolutely adore:
Howl's Moving Castle
Nausicaa of the Valley of the Wind
Atlantis: The Lost Empire
How To Train Your Dragon
Thor
Catching Fire

Currently have an obsession with Korean dramas.

My forte is Fantasy, Sci-Fi, a bit of Mystery and sometimes Action.

I do covers! I could really use the practice :) but note that I do reserve the right to reject any requests, for possible personal reasons.

Please don't ask me to read your story. It's rude, attention-seeking and I'll probably avoid your stuff for the rest of my life.

Also, please excuse the horribly unedited state of my earlier works. I'm lazy but they're on my eventual to-do list and I do have a life when I'm not crazily trying to get my insanity onto paper. You've been warned.
  • Location:
    Ba Sin Se
  • Joined:
    4 years ago

Reading Lists


10 Published Works

Featured work.

Element Guardians *To-Be-Edited*

Social data: 228K reads. 4K votes. 716 comments.

Description: After almost drowning, Rosella Alcot makes a discovery at the bottom of Lake Halloway that starts off a chain of events that would change hers and the lives of her friends forever. Relying on a guide that speaks in riddles and their natural instinc...

Completed

Other Works by RimUranium.
Playing Princess

Playing Princess

30.2K 995 116

Every little girl has wanted to be a princess: the pretty dresses, the balls and the princes. It was lik...

Completed
Redemption

Redemption

32.6K 745 654

Without any recollection of her past, Audrey lives her life, not knowing who she truly is. But when the...

Completed
Element Rebirth

Element Rebirth

117K 1.9K 382

Earth is the first planet to have survived a war with Hunters and still have their element crystals inta...

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Overload

Overload

2.4K 111 11

It's hard enough trying to have a normal life. When a complication forces June to give up the thing she...



RimUranium
Hey Gabrielle! I was going through my emails (which I haven't checked regularly and is now climbing to 1000 unread messages), and I saw that you messaged me. I was so sure I'd replied and I'm so sorry that I haven't. Eight months is ridiculous, even for me so here I am, having another look at your story :)

I have to be honest with you, I don't quite remember what the story was like before it but I can definitely say this is a huge improvement. Usually my comprehensive comments are very nitpicky about the tiniest of details so you must have really paid attention and gone back and fixed things up. I have to say, it worked really well.

I'm not usually very caught up in first chapters but this one really got me from the beginning. Although the wording is a little awkward in some places and it could flow more smoothly, I was still caught up in the action and the nervousness of hoping that she'd get out of this alive if it weren't for that dreaded ankle.

I like the suspense you've created and it's good. I can feel the panic and her will to survive. I don't have much time to continue further so my only advice to you is to keep writing, keep reading and never stop either.

I see that you're going to edit this story but from experience, I feel like unless it's absolutely mandatory, don't edit. I try not to edit. I see it as a form of procrastination, especially when I'm in the early chapters of a story that has so much potential but I just keep going back to fix up the tiniest little things that don't matter so much in the long run.

Keep writing. I'm curious to see where this will go so don't stop and don't edit until you've finished the story. Then you can really see the direction that you want to go and editing will just be a whole lot better in general if you can go through a fully finished story.

That being said, I don't even follow my own advice so it's up to you really :) NCEA Level 3 is a pain so I won't be on for much longer. Good luck with school and writing :)


RimUranium
I'm sorry I haven't replied until now but man, thank you so much. I appreciate your support and I'm sorry I've been so MIA and slack lately. Final year of high school can't possibly compare to what the other great writers on Wattpad are dealing with but unfortunately, school is taking its toll -_-

Regardless, I truly hope you enjoy the rest of my works, unfinished or not :)