@Lia_Swag Sure, I'll check it out when I'm finished with VV the girl below you, :)
Hey! could u check my joint novel with my friend on our account@tyrece ? its called 'mystique'...its our very first book so we really wanna know others opinion on it x) if u do like it then let us know :D and criticism will be accepted :P thx!!
Thank you so much! You don't even have to finish the book, just tell me what you think! :)))))))))))))
@Tyrece You're very welcome. =) Reviews +) Mystique @Tyrece I loved the whole concept to the story-line and all I really have to say is to work on the grammar marks. A few errors here and there, but... Mystique I like each chapter, but I'm not sure if you're writing in second person or first person? Anyway, if you're writing in first person, the character... I'm with the Band The introduction was good for a first story, :) I just think it should have been a tad longer. Maybe a bit more detail, some tweaking here and... I'm with the Band I love the poem structure, the anaphoras and the mystery. It unique in its own way and I truly hope to see more of your work. Reviews +) The Call