"Somewhere down under all that Vermont clay was my father, Haven Peck. Buried deep in the land he sweated so hard on and longed to own so much. And now it owned him."

In the end we all return to the beginning. And the land will own us.  

I'm a girl who likes to read. I usually stick with a handful of genres, probably because I like the protagonist to be near my age. I love movies, the action and the horror, especially when I can come up with a prediction for the ending and it's correct. I want to be a veterinarian, but I also fiddled with the idea of being an editor for a publishing company but decided to go with my main passion which is helping animals. I love protecting wildlife but that won't stop me from finding the biggest cheeseburger I can and devouring it. I like to root for the underdog and trample the bullies. I believe it's important to be who you want to be and not to let anyone change who you really are. I'm a very open person but I still feel complex and can't figure myself out sometimes. But I know for sure that I speak my mind and I call out on the BS. I'd like to think that I'm really down to earth. Wattpad has been home for me for a long time and I enjoy it everyday. One day I'll publish my own story and give it my all, but for now I will continue to read the fruits of your labor and critique it in a way that I hope it will help you and your audience. 
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I need to point it out but it's really confusing when you mentioned somebody else after another person's dialogue, it makes it confusing as to who's talking. Like saying "Roan laughed" after Eoin's dialogue makes it seem like it was Roan that said the dialogue. Enjoy the story but it's hard to read when it's incorrect like that.

Rae stares at one of the large paw prints on the ground below and takes a deep breath before closing her eyes, “He said…he said that I would have to be strong. He said that my mate would ask a lot of...
And why is it that in all of her musings of her mate that this was never brought up? Not once did she look back on the memory of her father talking about her mate this way. You would have thought that Kendrick would not have put her through the run if she already had an intended mate, and worrying for a week before it happened she would have thought about this moment. The lack of foreshadowing makes it hard to believe