The entire explanation doesn't make any sense.
"Somewhere down under all that Vermont clay was my father, Haven Peck. Buried deep in the land he sweated so hard on and longed to own so much. And now it owned him." In the end we all return to the beginning. And the land will own us. I'm a girl who likes to read. I usually stick with a handful of genres, probably because I like the protagonist to be near my age. I love movies, the action and the horror, especially when I can come up with a prediction for the ending and it's correct. I want to be a veterinarian, but I also fiddled with the idea of being an editor for a publishing company but decided to go with my main passion which is helping animals. I love protecting wildlife but that won't stop me from finding the biggest cheeseburger I can and devouring it. I like to root for the underdog and trample the bullies. I believe it's important to be who you want to be and not to let anyone change who you really are. I'm a very open person but I still feel complex and can't figure myself out sometimes. But I know for sure that I speak my mind and I call out on the BS. I'd like to think that I'm really down to earth. Wattpad has been home for me for a long time and I enjoy it everyday. One day I'll publish my own story and give it my all, but for now I will continue to read the fruits of your labor and critique it in a way that I hope it will help you and your audience.
Location:In a land far, far away.
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Loving The Beast (ManxMan)
You're missing a lot of capitalization
I'm so into it I don't hear the shower door open and I yelp as I feel arms wrap around me and pull me into a chest.
Why do the lyrics have to be written and take up so much space
Mad that he won't let me go I start to yell at him, allowing my accent to slip more, "Nigga, what duh fugg, bruh, let me go, 'cuz you getting me guh right now." It makes me mad that he doesn't say an...
Accent? It just sounds like ghetto slang
... or so I thought.
Oh my Gosh! What is going to happen?
"Good God, Bates! And I thought Hiroshima took a hit! That's not even human!" He exclaimed, pinching his nose.
Oh my God I can't stop laughing with this chapter
"They don't agree with my stomach either. They agree with my taste buds and that's all that matters," Bates said, the barbecue dripping from the sides of his mouth.
Bates is too funny