First, she says she arrives at 8:33, and then it's 8:07 and 8:12??????? Maybe you should pay a little more attention to details.
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It's kind of short but I like it. Simple. Simple is good. **P.S. - You called her 'Vel' in this one and 'Nel' on the other one. Since her dad called her 'Nellie', I am assuming the wrong one is 'Vel'.
The Broken Crown