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NickiChan commented on Unconditionally - Chapter two

"As I walked to the owlery..." 
One of the basic rules of writing: Do not abruptly switch from one POV to another, unless it is clearly stated that the switch in POV is part of a character's thoughts or dialogue. You were writing in 3rd person before, so you should stay in 3rd person throughout. :)