KissOfLife
9 months ago

Love your stories, Loved to Death is my favorite.

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UnwillingJoy
10 months ago

I just read your stories and i am creeped out, but in awe. I love all of them!

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Kayz_Saviour
11 months ago

Loved to Death is totally awesome. 

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CompletelyFalli...
11 months ago

Just thought I'd let you know, that Loved To Death is officially my favourite short story ever! :D It's seriously amazing<333 *off to read your other stories*

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11 months ago

Loved your story, Love To Death. Please continue, I also fanned you. So far I love your story

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Bluex12
11 months ago

Good concept for the story.. Mediocre execution. The writing was choppy, bland, uninspired. I felt no connection to any of the characters. So work on fleshing out your characters a bit more, and give more attention to your writing style.

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FeliciaJ
11 months ago

I would love to see your work published. It'd be a best seller. I'd love to see more of what you have to offer

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MikeJPW
1 year ago

@XxoctopusdiscoxX Thanks! Maybe one day :)

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G33_me
1 year ago

I'm definitely a fan...

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JeffLWallace
1 year ago

One thing to change.  Instead of "rapidly stopped"when talking about the principles voice over the intercom maybe abruptly would have been more appropriate?  Seriously fun read though.

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