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Love the little changes you'vd made - this is such a great story!Nadya Skylung and the Cloud...
I love where the dream goes in this chapter - it really does a nice job tying all the other bits of the dream together.
Soulwoven
I love this chapter! I'm having a hard time even listing the things I love about it, because it's just so awesome - Lit's emotions are so vivid,...
Soulwoven
Ditto to what cnjay47 said - I love getting a better glimpse into Quay's thoughts and motivations and worries and background. Awesome chapter.
Soulwoven
Love what you've done with Leramis and Ryse's relationship - I get it so much better in this version!
Soulwoven
