SarahWesten
2 years ago

Hi. Since you still want to read my work how about I send you the first 10 chapters (or less if you want). What's your email?

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ManiDhillon
2 years ago

@JeremyGordon You can check the message on facebook.

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JeremyGordon
2 years ago

hey man, didn't have the internet for a few days. what was the message??? :)

jeremy

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ManiDhillon
2 years ago

@Aetila Oh! I will read your story tonight and I'll leave feedback whether I like it or not.
By the way there are more than tolerable stories with female protagonist so I think you should have chosen a male lead. But anyway that's up to you, after all it's your story and idea.

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Aetila
2 years ago

Hey there! ٩(●̮̮̃•)۶ 

Your 99% reaction: ¬╭╮¬ ❝ Another lame, dumb, request.❞

Don't worry, it's completely understandable. It's also understandable when people say they'll return the favor and don't--so, if you reply, I'll read your story, first!

I'm entering the Watty Awards with my science fiction thriller "Empire Wars".

Your 99% reaction:❝ Cheesy name. Bet it's about a self-righteous, "chosen" princess, with sudden "kickass skills." ❞

Not exactly. Genre; Sci-fi, action, thriller, adventure, some mystery/suspense! My characters are not Mary/Gary Sues, and hopefully, they won't annoy you till you wish to to stab yourself and stuff candle wax down your ears! >◕‿◕< 

There is a lot of shooting, stabbing, killing (mostly random), machine guns, melting people, and something somewhat resembling romance, but will never be, because the characters are all semi-insane! 

If you still haven't deleted/ignored it by now, I want to thank you so much for reading, and here's the synopsis:

Meet Kiers van der Wolfe: insomniac, drug dealer, alcoholic, and amateur gaming addict. Life's simple and depressing for him and his band of misfits--until they're offered a deal with the biggest name in the electronic entertainment. Risking life and mind in the latest gaming technology playing the hardest game the world, where it's just too easy to die, Kiers and company have a guarantee to a lifetime of fortune and fame. Empire Wars may be the hardest cipher to crack, but it isn't as if the guys don't have anything up their sleeves. Join this cirque of real freaks of society, and let these amazing prodigies shamelessly steal your sanity. 

Votes are all greatly appreciated for Watty! <3 

But don't vote unless I deserve it, and criticism is always received gratefully! Thank you so much for reading this message!

-Celeste/Sarastro/Aetila

P.S. Dude. I can handle critique. xD
I've been a competitive athlete, I can give a candid review, so I can take it!

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illustrate
2 years ago

Thank you so much for reading, voting, and commenting! The constructive criticism is really appreciated! And yeah, we won't drift from our original storyline, we know exactly what we want in our story. Once again, thank you so much! =)

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rachloves2write
2 years ago

I do remember you! & thanks for friending me on FB. 

Yeah, I took off Angels in Alleyways becuase I didn't want anyone attempting to steal my work or plot-line etc, but I've started two new stories, which I plan on finishing. 

Thanks for stopping by my page though, and dropping a line :)
<3Rach

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ManiDhillon
2 years ago

@xxpinkwelliexx Yes Vampire/WereWolf stories are less interesting because people tend to copy Twilight.
But if you insist I will check your story in free time. And I never leave hurtfull comments.
I just give what humble advice I can.

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xxpinkwelliexx
2 years ago

Hey question here are vampire/demon/werewolf stories not original because people like to copy twilight?  Please check out my story &  tell me what you think I may warn you that any hurtful comments will be deleted but helpful criticism. Is welcome  

Thank you. Writing knows no boundaries  

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moongazer
3 years ago

The other story that i just started is MY BOYS AND MY COMPLICATED LIFE... i don't know if it's much of a story, i am still on the process on introducing the characters and i haven't uploaded any recent chapter on it as well. Scarlet Midnight is my first try on writing stories, i'm more into poetry. but if you have time to check on my collection of poetry, i would be glad if you could comment on them as well... take your time. i know it's such a bother at times lol but thank you so much for the reply =)

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