Mr. Dumont has a quiet, and perhaps even, boring life. Until he meets an active little woman with a taste for adventure, who is being abduct by two large men.
Umm, so you said you like feedback, and I have a little bit of critiquing if you do not mind. I really like the concept, but, at this point, I... Kingdom Flaws Intriguing story. I like the concept quite well. Keep it up. :) Kingdom Flaws