Hayley was an ordinary girl but one terrible mistake led to her possibly permanent loss of sight. Does she give up living or will she fight to keep her relationships, social life and school grades in tact?
@TheGirlFromNeverland "...pair if shoes that she had wanted for weeks and were now 50% off" it should be "...that were now..." It's a really minor... The Man I Love Wow, this is really nice. Great use of language and whatnot. I actually really like the description because I like to be able to imagine... Judas I Am [Watty Awards 2013] At first I felt so sympathetic towards her but she's really quite sadistic at the end so I'm not sure what to say. It's really good though it just... Justice @Sukh72 yeah I didn't really think about the title much so I just named it the first thing that came into my head. Perhaps I should have have it... Only Love's Fool Hey truffles I have no criticisms for this except on the 3rd paragraph the first sentence doesn't make much sense but its really well written :) The Man I Love