Status: Here's a chapter of Reader. Life's a bit crazy right now but I'm trying to get back into regular updates. Again (6 months ago)

LaurenDMSmith

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I'm a Canadian currently living at home (Yes, I know that's sad at my age. I'm hoping to move out by Christmas) and working for my local counties as a Tourism Representative. I write in my free time, what little of it that isn't taken up with traveling and hanging out with my friends. I appreciate all comments but I am especially grateful for any criticism. I am somewhat oblivious and often need to be hit over the head with something before I notice it. 
I'm also, despite the fact that I hate poetry, a published poet. 
Okay because I keep getting requests for it I'm just going to let you all know that I' not the hugest fan of  critiquing. I do it mostly as a stress reliever/ to help myself improve/because some people honestly just need a bit of help. When I critique I am incredibly mean and nit-picky. The worse the story is, the nastier I get. I am also brutally honest about it. Emphasis on the brutal part. Please bear this in mind when asking me to look at your work. I'll do it, but there's a high likelihood that I will tear your story apart. Also possibly your pride and your soul. You have been warned, so please, don't yell at me later if I critique your work or say I didn't tell you how bad I'd be. I have. 
Since I hate the constant posting of everything I do to it, if you want my tumblr account just go to laurendmsmith.tumblr.com . It's half blog-half writing website but there's a place for questions in case any of you have ones you want to ask. You can also ask anonymously if you like.
Thanks for reading!
Reading order for the Cinderella series: Cinderella vs. Prince Charming, Cinderella vs. the Fairy Godmother, and Cinderella vs. Happily Ever After. The Step Sister vs. Cinderella is kind of number four.

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Reader Believes

Reader Believes

40 parts / 53 pages, updated Feb 23, 2014PG
Rika has finally gotten home and is all set to put the events of the past months behind her. That is until Ahisu arrives with an offer she can't refuse. Now she's helping ... read more
17,625 reads votes 661 comments 64
Enveloping Shadows

Enveloping Shadows

3 parts / 2 pages, updated Feb 18, 2014PG-13
As the chief bodyguard for Crown Princess Aricia, Sir Terrwyn has more than her fair share of problems. She is forced to balance her training, overseeing the other bod... read more
160 reads votes 3 comments 0
What He Heard

What He Heard

29 parts / 38 pages, updated Feb 18, 2014PG-13
Getting through high school can be tough, but it’s even more so when you’re a sasquatch. Willow’s lucky, having a best friend in the form of Rune, who accepted even the othe... read more
8,410 reads votes 359 comments 35
Ryder's Call

Ryder's Call

10 parts / 13 pages, updated Jan 29, 2014PG-13
Evan’s never seen much use for the training his father’s forced him to do almost from birth. He’d much rather live a normal life, do normal things like the other students.... read more
1,173 reads votes 60 comments 10
Letter to My Plagiarist

Letter to My Plagiarist

1 page, updated Jan 24, 2014PG-13Completed
Message I sent after finding out that someone had stolen one of my stories
561 reads votes 22 comments 16
Arresting Eyes (On Hiatus)

Arresting Eyes (On Hiatus)

5 parts / 7 pages, updated Dec 12, 2013PG-13Video
Work in the paranormal Missing Division, when not being borrowed by other departments, is hard enough, but Casey, better known by her codename of Gorgon, has mor... read more
551 reads votes 30 comments 0
Blowing Embers

Blowing Embers

53 parts / 64 pages, updated Nov 29, 2013PG-13VideoCompleted
Kallai has a tendency to make things explode. Not on purpose, but every spell she’s ever tried has gone up in a puff of smoke. Literally. And being the only mage in school ... read more
13,473 reads votes 1,072 comments 25
What Boredom Spawns

What Boredom Spawns

63 parts / 86 pages, updated Oct 21, 2013PG-13Completed
Mijinji is a mercenary who’s been getting caught up in odd situations for the last year thanks to his eccentric, and chronically unlucky, partner Vergon. The gods’ war... read more
27,292 reads votes 832 comments 52
Silver Bound Girl

Silver Bound Girl

44 parts / 59 pages, updated Aug 26, 2013PG-13Completed
Willow's a Byron and they aren't just your average family. Not just because there are so many of them, but because they have secrets and traditions far outside the norm.... read more
16,247 reads votes 887 comments 71
There's an Invisible Man Sleeping in My Bed

There's an Invisible Man Sleeping in My Bed

52 parts / 69 pages, updated Jun 20, 2013PG-13VideoCompleted
Convinced for months that she’s been hallucinating, Thalia is not at all happy to find that Colt is very real. She thinks he’s a ghost, something he continuously denies, and is focusing her energy on getting rid of him, whatever it takes.
303,903 reads votes 5,827 comments 416
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