Yeah Craig is pretty jerkish but he has alot of issues with his mom and other stuff. You'll find out later on what all happened. Not that thats an excuse.
Thanks for the input. It's good to hear the truth from my fans.
To be honest, I'm pretty poor at writing high school stories, [in case you didn't notice every time Kayli gets put into school she pretty much gets pulled out again. ;P] but i thought I'd give it an attempt. It's great to get truthful feedback about it :)
So thanks, don't worry, I'll be writing more on my other stories from now on; TTR, FFF [i feel like Fight For Flight is getting excluded ;], Moonlit Shadows and... maybe Dream Child. Still not sure about it. I'll try writing the next chapter and see how i go.
I appreciate any and all comments. I understand your reaction (I'd never hook up with any of my cousins), and I'm not offended at all. All stories need a conflict to be interesting, and there have been so many storylines that have been thoroughly over-used on wattpad. I came up with the idea of the story because I wanted to write something new and unpredictable.
I'm sorry that you don't like it. It's gotten a huge response, and people's reactions range from disgust to amusement. I'll take either (lol). Like buriedinbooks mentioned, this is NOT a true story (though I'm sure this has happened before). None of it is real.
Another note, I did a little research when I first started writing and there is relatively little risk in two cousins having an baby together. Unlike direct siblings, there is little potential harm to the baby... unless their children have babies who in turn have more babies and so on and so on (ew, I know... lol).
Hope you'll give some of my other stories a shot! (;
Ok Kennwillkillme12 i did NOT mean 2 be a bitch 2 u.I had a bad day and i guess i took it out on u.I am sorry ok but all over the world cousins are getting married and havng babies it is legal now but the genes and some hormones usually get screwd up so the it is not encouraged but what we are arguing about is a story it is FICTION!!I am not a big fan of cousins getting laid either(eww)but the story IS interesting and the author has feelings so breaking it so hard to her is not very nice in fact it is down right nasty so if you dont like a story quit reading it no need to say it is a yuck one.And i am very sorry i prejudged you i thought you were like nmkool who became a fan of mrrpup and had the nerve to say(or type hehe)that she just read the stories to entertain herself and it was bullcrap.
I hope you forgive me.
So friends??(2 much to ask i know)
P.S-cool story.
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(buriedinbooks)
thanks sooo muh for your comments:D
i'm soo glad you seem to like my story!! yay lol.
& about it being a featured story...
ya, i just about had a HEARTATTACK lol
Hey thanks for becoming a fan and leaving a comment it was really nice!:P I'll try to upload as fast as I can!
You got a good story by the way, you should keep on writing!!