@JVernis No problem. Just trying to help out. I really appreciate that authors such as yourself are providing these stories to us for free. We... The Viking's Hold Overall I like the story so this may seem like nitpicking, but either it was normal for women to work alongside men at hard labor or it wasn't. If... All the Wrong Reasons A two year old is still a toddler and would definitely not be learning how to shoot a bow and arrow or ride a horse. Oil painting would also be... All the Wrong Reasons Great story but I would have more time pass before she accuses him of not bonding with Cooper. It is also very stupid of her to compare his... All the Wrong Reasons 2 is too young for the words you put in the boy's mouth. I was thinking the child had to be 4. All the Wrong Reasons