um could u please read my story. its my first so i need some help.thanks
@silversorbet Haha awesome :D I LOVE your story..new beginnings XD and also ur About Me, that made me laugh :D
@RebelGirl16 No probs ^^ You're stories are great :D I liked Apocolipse Story, I think you should carry on with it :)
Thanks for fanning! I was out of town and couldn't check anything. But now I'm back and more relaxed. So happiness all around!
Heya ^^ Next part coming up soon :) Just need to do some editing :D
Thanks for reading!! >_<
@dreamernow31 Heyaa :D I've read it and i think its really gd, i just think tht you need to describe ur main character's surroundings a bit more, so the reader feels a bit more 'in the story', but other than tht i like it! :D