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JeffreyBass

Name Jeffrey Bass
Location Potomac, Maryland
Member Since Feb 17, 2012
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Cave of Dreams

Cave of Dreams

7 parts / 11 pages, updated Feb 26, 2012
Marcus Jenson is not what you would call a hero. He's about as far from Indiana Jones and James Bond as you can get. But when Marcus is thrown into the mysterious realm of "the cave," the fate of the universe suddenly rests in his hands.
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Not really my kind of story to be honest. But I really like your dialogue, it was really cute and realistic :)
This Little Girl

I really like the story but sometimes you tell a little more than show. Like when you say "making him look creepy and gross" it would be better if...
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I really like how you immediately throw the reader into a completely new freaky world. Keep it up :D
The Meteor Moon

You have great cliff hangery chapter endings hahaha
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I'm a little confused who the narrator is. If it's the baby from the prologue then how does she know what her mother looks like? Her dreams are...
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