Status: Read ma story! (1 year ago)

JeffreyBass

Name Jeffrey Bass
Location Potomac, Maryland
Member Since Feb 17, 2012
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Cave of Dreams

Cave of Dreams

7 parts / 11 pages, updated Feb 26, 2012
Marcus Jenson is not what you would call a hero. He's about as far from Indiana Jones and James Bond as you can get. But when Marcus is thrown into the mysterious realm of "the cave," the fate of the universe suddenly rests in his hands.
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Hi there! I'm not sure if you remember me or not but about a year a go you read my extremely short first draft of the first of the Born Human trilogy. (Previously known as Born Human. Due to die an experiment, but now it is know as Born Human. Due to die the Creation of a Madman.) I was just wondering if you could perhaps critique the second draft of the new version of book one that I am in the process of editing. No worries if you can't, I don't mind. 
Many thanks,
- E C Cooledge :) 
CarlyJack
CarlyJack

9 months ago
I like your story.There is only very few writers I like.So I want your opinion on my story.

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1887774-the-arrow%27s-sword
flowerzz
flowerzz

11 months ago
Wanna read more! Where's the next chapter :)
CrazyStarChick
CrazyStarChick

1 year ago
Wow who knew that Jeff had a Wattpad account!
coolcat1999
coolcat1999

1 year ago
i am ur fan!!!!!!!! u write relly well
nutterbutter
nutterbutter

1 year ago
Added your story to my library and shared it on Facebook and Twitter :D Hope your story does well.
Hi,
Just wondering if you got some spare time, could you check out some of my books? It means a lot to me if you can
Thanks anyway
E :)
JeffreyBass
JeffreyBass

1 year ago
Then I will give you a pancake but you will eat it in shame!
JeffreyBass
JeffreyBass

1 year ago
@DragonWolfy I will if they tell me!
Mr_Aek
Mr_Aek

1 year ago
@JeffreyBass It's okay, I'm 95% sure I lost a thread I posted somewhere and there were still people on it i never got back to, you're not the first :p

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