About

I'm a nice person. I love making new friends and talking to people. I'm really busy sometimes because of work, but in my spare time I love to write, read, draw, watch movies, hang with friends, and edit old stuff that I've written. I graduated college December 2013 and have a job in editing. 

I hate talking about myself. It's better when people are asking me questions. 

Anywho, werewolf people should check out my RED series. RED: The Beginning, RED: The Alpha Competition and RED: The Rebirth of Sath. 

Books I'm currently working on include: 
1. The Sleeping Beauty
2. Strays

"We outgrow love, like other things
And put it in the Drawer—
Till it an Antique fashion shows—
Like Costumes Grandsires wore. " -Emily Dickinson

"Between my finger and my thumb   
The squat pen rests; snug as a gun." -Seamus Heaney

"You don’t forget the face of the person who was your last hope.” -Suzanne Collins

“If all else perished, and he remained, I should still continue to be; and if all else remained, and he were annihilated, the universe would turn to a mighty stranger.” -Emily Bronte
  • Location:
    The Enchanted Forest
  • Joined:
    2 years ago

Reading Lists

Will Read
14 stories
Have Read
4 stories

8 Published Works

Featured work.

The Sleeping Beauty #Wattys2014

Social data: 29 reads. 3 votes. 2 comments.

Description: Philip Loup DeBlanc is a sixteen-year-old young beta, struggling to find his place in a new world. Accompanied by his guard, a witch, he is sent away to attend Starlit Academy in Salem City, where he struggles to meet new friends. His best friend, A...


Other Works by JDPseudonymMorgan.
RED: The Rebirth of Sath, Book Three #wattys2014

RED: The Rebirth of Sath, Book Three #wattys2014

3.4K 102 48

Aeron and Shei have resided in Sath for a year with no problems, but their lives are threatened when a n...

RED: The Alpha Competition, Book Two-- UNEDITED

RED: The Alpha Competition, Book Two-- UNEDITED

13.2K 280 63

Aeron is kept hidden in Salem. Riley is on a search to find him. Alpha Czarny has restarted the Alpha Co...

RED: The Beginning, Book One- EDITED

RED: The Beginning, Book One- EDITED

47.7K 807 117

It's mating season. Twenty women from all over Hockswith have been chosen for arranged marriages to twen...

Strays

Strays

297 14 4

I’m on a train. I don’t know where it’s going, but it’s taking me far away from here. I want to...

JDPseudonymMorgan commented on Act my Age


JDPseudonymMorgan
Hey, just reading over your things like you asked.! Hope you don't mind some constructive criticism. :-) I like your dialogue. I like that it sounds genuine. There are a few pointers I'll give you: When you're writing numbers smaller than one hundred, always write out the number. So "17' would be "seventeen". Also, when you're ending dialogue, you have to end it with punctuation. For example: "Jimmy likes school." Or, "Jimmy likes school," said his mom.

I like this line: "Oh please, put a sock in it." I retort, a sour look on my face, causing him to grin like an chesire cat. But I'd write: "Oh, please! Put a sock in it," I retorted, a sour look on my face. He grinned like the Cheshire cat. (The Cheshire Cat is a fictional character, so you should use "the" and not "a".)

Also, be careful when you're writing so that you don't switch tenses. I see a few instances where you switch from present to past tense. 

Other than a little grammatical issues, this story has some real potential. I hope this helps you out and thanks for trusting me to check out your work. :-) Good luck with all your writing. 

-J.D.P. Morgan