JCKing

Name Janie
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JCKing

1 year ago
I read your most recent addition to the story about Claire.  You have a good many grammatical errors and it changes characters rather quickly.  However, if you could introduce the characters in advance, that would be better.  You are good though.  I am proud of you.

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My Guardian Angel {Rewriting}

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Teenage Life

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