Nice Story. I loved how you included the 'immortal human' situation in the end! Keep writting! :) Just My Luck, Stuck With Th... I loved your Story! Keep writing:) Not One of Them. I loved your Story!! Rightfully His It wad a good story, the ending made me sad but since there's a sequel i guess it's fair :) will the sequel still be tackling on their relationship? Fighting to be Free (Comple... I really loved your story, beggining to end. Reading this was heart warming and the fact that is it actually tackling real life situations. keep... Beating You