@HilariouslyHillary Thank you for fanning adding SFM to y
our reading list! And thank you for your critics,by the way...Sorry,maybe i'm too late to thanked you,you know,school stuff...
~Billie
This was an improvement in plotline, I really enjoy reading this chapter aside from the grammar and spelling error. Oh, and good job with the... Searching For Maya I wonder what the dreams means? Does those dreams the keep getting have something to do with what happened with how people just disappear into... Searching For Maya Haha, so this was a funny chapter. I couldn't get the image of a fat black woman trying to... I don't even know what to call it! Oh, well, nice... Searching For Maya Well, this was a short chapter. There wasn't exactly a plot in it, but the 'interrogation' are quite enjoyable. More humor in this story, would be... Searching For Maya I agree with@Lalocaluna3, this story is hard to read because all the grammatical and spelling error, you guys might want to find an editor, soon.... Searching For Maya