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Name HatedLove6
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I will try to review, but don't expect me to hold back whatever's bothering me about a story.  I'm not going to sugarcoat it, but I will try to be fair.  You don't have to follow my review; it is your story, and you are the one writing it.  I'm just trying to help get you thinking.  You can ignore me for all I care, I'm just letting you know what one of your readers is thinking.

Well, I really hope you enjoy my works.  You can ask me to read your stories also, if you want.  The only reason I would bite is for horrible spelling, grammar, punctuation, and horrible plot structure.  So if your spelling and grammar is decent (I'll still point it out though), your characters are believable, and if your story makes sense with plenty of explanation to support it, then I'll probably like it.  Basically, most of my pet peeves can be found in my work, "Mary-Sue: Who is She?"

Please no fanfiction, that's why I'm on FF.Net.

I want to say no vampires, but if it's truly decent, I'll give it a chance.

No werewolves unless it's heavily inspired by the original traditional lore.

Let the title be good and not give away the story.

No "emos," "preps," and the other nine yards with the stereotyping.  I am truly tired of this, more so than vampires.

LGBT and Straight stories are fine, as long as it's not explicit.

I don't mind taboos such as teacher/student pairings, incest, polygamy, etc. as long as all parties are humans who are able to make rational decisions (from older teens to an adult) and are consensual.  Just make sure to keep the laws in mind when developing the characters and story.

I don't enjoy reader-insert, or second person stories.  Just because I'm writing "A Smile to Hide" doesn't mean I enjoy reading it (unless it's CYOA or WWYFF).

I do NOT enjoy real person fiction.  At.  All.  That means no Justin Beiber, One Direction, or anyone else.


The Mary-Sue Complaints Checklist

The Mary-Sue Complaints Checklist

24 parts / 41 pages, updated Apr 15, 2014G
My second Mary-Sue series revolving around specific complaints most people would declare as Mary-Sueish or considered as bad writing, which I don't agree... read more
476 reads votes 0 comments 3
A Smile to Hide (CYOA/WWYFF)

A Smile to Hide (CYOA/WWYFF)

19 parts / 44 pages, updated Mar 07, 2014PG-13
Three years ago, the murder of your best friend has started the entanglement of all the peace that was gained, and the longer that your town lives in the lies t... read more
757 reads votes 3 comments 4
Things I Wish I Could Tell Reviewers Without Looking Like a Total Jerk

Things I Wish I Could Tell Reviewers Without Looking Like a Total Jerk

3 pages, updated Mar 03, 2014PGCompleted
This is an expression of my frustration due to a lack of control I have over other people, especially on the internet.
5 reads votes 0 comments 0
Telling Your Friend They Have a Mary-Sue

Telling Your Friend They Have a Mary-Sue

2 pages, updated Mar 03, 2014GCompleted
A five-step guide to reviewing a story that may or may not contain a Mary-Sue.
6 reads votes 0 comments 0
Fan Fiction: Respect Our Rights

Fan Fiction: Respect Our Rights

5 parts / 11 pages, updated Dec 31, 2013PG-13Completed
Why write fan fiction? Are we committing a crime? What are all of these different terms? Why not write original fiction? Do I have any rights as a fan ... read more
7 reads votes 0 comments 0
The Bird and the Fish

The Bird and the Fish

1 page, updated Dec 29, 2013GCompleted
This is a short story about a fish who wants to fly.
2 reads votes 0 comments 0
The Occasional Verse

The Occasional Verse

2 parts / 1 page, updated Mar 05, 2013PG-13
I don't write poems that often, but will when I feel up to it, or when I have enough inspiration. Some will be more than one stanza, or maybe just a single stanza. S... read more
108 reads votes 2 comments 4
Cry For Me

Cry For Me

6 parts / 26 pages, updated Feb 17, 2013PG-13
A written shoujo-ai/LGBTQ about Hiro who gains a new roommate and immediately clings to her to desperately try to make a good impression, but Kasumi would rather her just leave h... read more
1,670 reads votes 20 comments 20
Mary-Sue:  Who is She?

Mary-Sue: Who is She?

11 parts / 64 pages, updated Sep 25, 2012RCompleted
Want to know what a Mary-Sue is? Want a few writing tips along the way? Look no further. I discuss character development through making the character, writing style,... read more
708 reads votes 10 comments 2
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