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14 Mate R'verum Born N Bred Kimmi Park Kinda Girl Brown Hair Green Eyes Love To Write Love Ma Friday/Saturday Nights Social KInda Girl
Message Boardhey could you chek out my stories and lemme know what u think. i got a few up, so read what ever intrests you.
xoxo peace, love and choc-chip cookies!  17xoxo Nov 20, 2009 09:47 reply spam Ohhhh My God I Wrote The Next Part To Chapter 5 On Ma Mums Laptop And Nows Hers Has Broken :@:@:@
Sorry Guys Its Gunna Be A Bit Longer Nahh Untill I Can Upload Again  HannahMarie Nov 20, 2009 05:57 reply spam Heyy Everyone, I Can't Upload As Much As I Would Like To As My Laptop Is Broke, SO The Only Time I Get To Write And Upload Is At School For The Time Being
HannahMarie x HannahMarie Nov 11, 2009 05:00 reply spam Hello People Will You Read Through My Story And Tell Me What You Think Please?
Thank You Love All My Fans <3 HannahMarie Oct 26, 2009 11:03 reply spam hey ive just written a new story called 'Beauty kills the freak or im not your stereotypical BAD girl'
could you read and comment and stuff- I really your opinion. thx scout is out,  appletart-scout Oct 20, 2009 04:40 reply spam right, hello again lol :)
i just read through the two chapters you have up and the general idea you have seems to appeal to the target audience i believe you have gone for (teen right?) The layout you have gone for is interesting- i think its because both characters are in a dream but i might be wrong, it could just be how you want it. I would advise you to just write in normal paragraphs from now onwards, because its easier to read and people will take your work more seriously :) Also, one more thing, read through your work and check for grammar and spelling mistakes before you post it :) Other than that I enjoyed it and you've certainly captured my imagination. If you need any help ever, just email me at: aspiring_author15@yahoo.co.uk love, rhiannon xxx  aspiring_author Oct 17, 2009 08:19 reply spam hello :)
are they the two parts up now? i'll read them now and add another message saying what i think :) love, rhiannon xxx aspiring_author Oct 17, 2009 08:09 reply spam Sorry For Not Uploading Ill Do It At School Today, Also Chapter 5 Is Coming Along Nicely By Time I Finish It It Should Be About 6 Pages I Hope
XOXO HannahMarie Oct 13, 2009 01:27 reply spam |
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