if you widened this into a story line it could make quite the book my friend. not sure if you intend on it but tit may be something you want to... Murder Day and Other Subcon... Loved the ending Hunni!! Your right, not every story should a happy ending and I was happy yours didn't. It needed the darkness :) SwEeT MaDnEsS (Watty Awards... K seriously, this is Hollywood worthy. You need to really focus on getting this made into a movie deal. Too me it is.just as exciting if not more... The Zombie Prophecies -Part... I am loving this story Hunni, keep up the good work. Remember only people who are awesome have haters :) inregards to it not being realistic, I... Abducted Loving the new chapter babe :-) good job on this whole book I have recommended it to many people :-) His To Keep