Hello fellow Wattpadders! Alex here. If you're wondering where my "about me" is, it's located under my story 'My Extended "About Me".' Check it out if you want to learn more about me, and if it's not enough, ask me yourself!
A king lived in greed his entire life, until his workers revolted. It is now up to him to fulfill an ancient prophecy to once again gain the trust of the people. Will he get the people back working for him in his castle?
@WritingMyEscape Your welcome. I'm in the Christmas spirit, which means I'm very generous!
Hey, thanks for all the random voting :) Means a lot! :D
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This story kind of reminds me of the famous short story "Gore". I think you created a super special awesome beginning to an ongoing series, and... Only for you Perhaps you could add a little more description or remove a tad bit of dialogue to balance it out. Great so far! Going to continue. Only for you Wonderful beginning! It's always great to start off a story with great suspense right from the get go. Other than a few punctuation errors, there... Only for you